Go Girl
a 30-syllable poem9 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 30 Syllables writing prompt. If you can pass for either, good deal! Why rush it? Expand the playing field for a bit and see where the ball lands, so to speak. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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An excellent entry for the 30 Syllables writing prompt. If you can pass for either, good deal! Why rush it? Expand the playing field for a bit and see where the ball lands, so to speak. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thanks, Marilyn
Comment from royowen
I'm rather bemused by the change in pronouns, some can't be called either, but I ask what's on your birth certificate? heh heh, people have become a little precious beautifully written Bill, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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I'm rather bemused by the change in pronouns, some can't be called either, but I ask what's on your birth certificate? heh heh, people have become a little precious beautifully written Bill, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thanks, Roy
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Welcome Bill
Comment from Shanbreen
This 30 syllable poem sends a brave message. I like to consider myself as an open-minded person, and in that context your poem was refreshing. BTW, I have friend who after 20 years or so, has still not come out of the closet. Thanks for sharing. Best of luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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This 30 syllable poem sends a brave message. I like to consider myself as an open-minded person, and in that context your poem was refreshing. BTW, I have friend who after 20 years or so, has still not come out of the closet. Thanks for sharing. Best of luck for the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Shanbreen
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.
I'm having trouble deciding what kind of sex this is
I believe it is all plutonic. But, I have re read it four times and I'm still not sure
Either way, it seems she pleases, whoever comes across her
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.
I'm having trouble deciding what kind of sex this is
I believe it is all plutonic. But, I have re read it four times and I'm still not sure
Either way, it seems she pleases, whoever comes across her
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Pam
Comment from Dr. Nad
Well, I believe your story is correct some people haven't decided where they want to go what they want to be. They believe they can make their own choice and live happily ever after. I hope they do live happily ever after.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Well, I believe your story is correct some people haven't decided where they want to go what they want to be. They believe they can make their own choice and live happily ever after. I hope they do live happily ever after.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Doc
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You are most welcome my friend.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Perfectly fulfilling the 30 syllable stipulation, your verse has a fun and fluent element to it with pleasing rhyme and excellent finale for this enigmatic 'girl.' Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Perfectly fulfilling the 30 syllable stipulation, your verse has a fun and fluent element to it with pleasing rhyme and excellent finale for this enigmatic 'girl.' Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Debbie
Comment from Nicki Nance
The contrast between the intense, mysterious serious person in the picture and the light hearted, affirming poem is brilliant. Thank you for a great read.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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The contrast between the intense, mysterious serious person in the picture and the light hearted, affirming poem is brilliant. Thank you for a great read.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Nicki
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem shares acceptance with such a light hearted and fun tone. The use of rhyme adds to the playful nature of the verses. I love how you celebrate the freedom and positivity of embracing one's non-specific gender identity. The phrase "Go girl!" at the end is the perfect cheer!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Your poem shares acceptance with such a light hearted and fun tone. The use of rhyme adds to the playful nature of the verses. I love how you celebrate the freedom and positivity of embracing one's non-specific gender identity. The phrase "Go girl!" at the end is the perfect cheer!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Michael.
Comment from Gunner Lil
An easy read and a very nice picture of the Go Girl.
This poem has a very good pace and flow.
It is a good addition to the contest.
Good luck and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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An easy read and a very nice picture of the Go Girl.
This poem has a very good pace and flow.
It is a good addition to the contest.
Good luck and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you, GL