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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from shelley kaye
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

excellent satori!
perfect pic and words
so calming and peaceful
like the pink, purple, and gold colours, too
a gentle haiku - nice...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Beautiful words and imagery. I can see the peaceful symbolism in the lake as it pertains to heaven. As I got older, and perhaps wiser? I started to envision heaven a little differently. Still peaceful, but with a lot of stuff to do. lol. I feel comfortable sharing this with you so, I'd rather live on Earth, and I honestly believe tgat many of us will still live here. In a better place, but here.
Thanks for sharing.
RJ

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. My idea of heaven is different too.

    Gypsy
reply by RJ Heritage on 30-Jun-2024
    You?re welcome
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant!! I absolutely LOVE this one!! The words are fabulous, and the artwork seals the deal. Really exceptional work with this one, Gypsy!! xoxox

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Rachelle, you are making me blush... more ... more... LoL
    I hope you are having a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by Rachelle Allen on 29-Jun-2024
    I always call it like I see it, Gypsy. I'm kind of like the Umpire of FS!!! hahaha.
Comment from Sugarray77
Exceptional
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This is very well written Gypsy. I love the serene presentation and the superb narrative in your short verse. I really enjoyed reading it.

Melissa

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
    Melissa

    Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.

    Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
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You always show us that perspective of the sky reflected in some liquid and giving us that way of looking at things differently. Yes, seeing the sunset in a lake would be like dipping into heaven, especially on a hot summer night!

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a lovely day.

    Love

    Gypsy

Comment from royowen
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I love to see the reflection of the surrounding beauty, captured in the mirror of a lake, the sea, a puddle, there is a doubling of the affect on the senses, this is beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
    Roy

    Thank you very much for your exceptional five stars review.

    Gypsy
reply by royowen on 29-Jun-2024
    Well done
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Yes, the sunset does appear to dip into the water. How beautiful. I always enjoy your beautiful presentation and poetry. I attempted a poem please share your thoughts.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
    Barbara

    Thank you very much for your exceptional five stars review.

    Gypsy