Unrecognizable
a 5 Line Poem26 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5 Line Poem contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. Goodluck!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novali
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Excellent entry for the 5 Line Poem contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. Goodluck!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novali
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much Gypsy!
Melissa
Comment from barbara.wilkey
We need to have some lows in our lives so we can recognize the highs and enjoy them more. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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We need to have some lows in our lives so we can recognize the highs and enjoy them more. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much Barbara!!
Melissa
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed this five line poem. You got the syllable count correct, and you made an excellent point. I also like the picture you supplied. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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I enjoyed this five line poem. You got the syllable count correct, and you made an excellent point. I also like the picture you supplied. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
Comment from QC Poet
A likable message in this poem but i did seem to count a syllable to many
It maybe a reading quark I have so I didn't use a syllable counter
Thabks for Sharing your 2-2-5-7-5 poem
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A likable message in this poem but i did seem to count a syllable to many
It maybe a reading quark I have so I didn't use a syllable counter
Thabks for Sharing your 2-2-5-7-5 poem
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This five-line poem, Unrecognizable, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that we need the lows to gauge how high we can go and have gone.
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This five-line poem, Unrecognizable, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that we need the lows to gauge how high we can go and have gone.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
Comment from gramalot8
You have written a very good entry for the 5 line poem contest... with the added challenge of the required syllable count. And you have given your readers a great message as well. Thanks for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.
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You have written a very good entry for the 5 line poem contest... with the added challenge of the required syllable count. And you have given your readers a great message as well. Thanks for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I like your poem. It is unique. Picture is different. Good choice for your poem. Good luck in the contest. I guess we all have highs and lows especially the way the world is.
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I like your poem. It is unique. Picture is different. Good choice for your poem. Good luck in the contest. I guess we all have highs and lows especially the way the world is.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I suppose we have to experience the lows to appreciate the highs Melissa and love brings that rollercoaster to us all when our heart is touched by another, I enjoyed your five liner, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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I suppose we have to experience the lows to appreciate the highs Melissa and love brings that rollercoaster to us all when our heart is touched by another, I enjoyed your five liner, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you Dolly! So appreciate you!
Melissa
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nicely worded five lines one for the contacts and I wish you the very best with the contest and you have a wonderful day and may God bless you and bless your writing. Patricia
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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This is a very nicely worded five lines one for the contacts and I wish you the very best with the contest and you have a wonderful day and may God bless you and bless your writing. Patricia
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thanks so very much for your lovely review, Patricia :)
Melissa
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Very simply, yet eloquently written with a very real message which I'm sure so many can resonate with.
The image certainly highlights and profiles the message.
Good luck.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Very simply, yet eloquently written with a very real message which I'm sure so many can resonate with.
The image certainly highlights and profiles the message.
Good luck.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thanks so very much for your lovely review, Shirley :)
Melissa