Is it over yet?
Joe needing a nap7 total reviews
Comment from Sallyo
Succinct and witty... but there's a spelling mistake which I think needs attention- that is if you meant "lose" and in not win, and not "loose" and in "not tight".
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Succinct and witty... but there's a spelling mistake which I think needs attention- that is if you meant "lose" and in not win, and not "loose" and in "not tight".
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Uh oh, Mystery Poet! Your last word here should be spelled with only one 'o.' The word here is the opposite of tight.
It's a cute graphic...but for me it confused the poem a little since your first line says Old Joe did NOT snooze.
Anyway, good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Uh oh, Mystery Poet! Your last word here should be spelled with only one 'o.' The word here is the opposite of tight.
It's a cute graphic...but for me it confused the poem a little since your first line says Old Joe did NOT snooze.
Anyway, good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you
Comment from royowen
I'm absolutely sure what you're saying here, but I think the artwork is great and the artwork seems to be having a little shot at sleepy Joe, and I watched the debate partially, but that never convinces me of anything, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : But old Joe did (loose) lose?
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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I'm absolutely sure what you're saying here, but I think the artwork is great and the artwork seems to be having a little shot at sleepy Joe, and I watched the debate partially, but that never convinces me of anything, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : But old Joe did (loose) lose?
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Comment from Sally Law
My take exactly. Oh my, why don't the democrats see this guy for who he truly is? I mean ... really? A great poem in a blink. Literally. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the contest.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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My take exactly. Oh my, why don't the democrats see this guy for who he truly is? I mean ... really? A great poem in a blink. Literally. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the contest.
Sally :))
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
I don't think Joe will snooze at all. He's pretty on the ball Once in a while he has trouble retrieving a word, but who doesn't?
Maybe trump will be so afraid and skip the debate. He's already talking about doing so
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Here. Why would you
Put an extra O in loose. You should say lose and fhat even rhymes.
"But old Joe did loose"
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Hi
I don't think Joe will snooze at all. He's pretty on the ball Once in a while he has trouble retrieving a word, but who doesn't?
Maybe trump will be so afraid and skip the debate. He's already talking about doing so
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Here. Why would you
Put an extra O in loose. You should say lose and fhat even rhymes.
"But old Joe did loose"
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Unclear Saria
Haha! This couplet indeed made me chuckle! Thank you so much for sharing. This captures the essence of the contest really well and in brief, good luck with the contest
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Haha! This couplet indeed made me chuckle! Thank you so much for sharing. This captures the essence of the contest really well and in brief, good luck with the contest
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Is It Over Yet?, comes down on Sleepy Joe's performance on the debate night. The situation looks like we can drop an old man, sick and medicated, and choose the lying sack of shit.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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This poem, Is It Over Yet?, comes down on Sleepy Joe's performance on the debate night. The situation looks like we can drop an old man, sick and medicated, and choose the lying sack of shit.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thank you.