The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Having the ghosts appear in the sheriff's office is a great way to get Tyler to get involved. Her editor pretty quickly stepped back also thanks to the appearance of ghosts. You have a really big gang assembled to stop the mob. Good job writing the plot so that Sandra gets what she wants.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Having the ghosts appear in the sheriff's office is a great way to get Tyler to get involved. Her editor pretty quickly stepped back also thanks to the appearance of ghosts. You have a really big gang assembled to stop the mob. Good job writing the plot so that Sandra gets what she wants.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Les turned tail and headed out of there. You can tell he sits in an office and everyone else checks out the crimes. He wanted the glory but not the trouble or the ghosts. Thanks so much, Carol.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a great chapter with lots of movement and reveals. Les moves in and tries to take over Sandra's case. Once ghosts appear, he scurries away, possibly out of fear, or possibly to leave Sandra hanging in case everything is a hoax. The biggest fun is yet to come.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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This is a great chapter with lots of movement and reveals. Les moves in and tries to take over Sandra's case. Once ghosts appear, he scurries away, possibly out of fear, or possibly to leave Sandra hanging in case everything is a hoax. The biggest fun is yet to come.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Hi there, Lorraine! You are right! The biggest fun is yet to come! Thank you for continuing to read and enjoy the story. As we near the end it gets a little crazy. I am having fun and I hope you are too!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ulla
This is a great continuation, Carol. I can so understand the confusion and disbelief. Patrick had a great time and relished in it all. So would I have done. I love this story. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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This is a great continuation, Carol. I can so understand the confusion and disbelief. Patrick had a great time and relished in it all. So would I have done. I love this story. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Yes, Patrick got the job done but he had a good time while he did it. Can't fault him for wanting to take a bite of the apple one last time.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
Smiling here... Patrick was singing and having himself a good old time!
(Can we blame him? It's been a long time stuck in that mansion!)
I'm tickled every time the Judge appears... Les needs to start up a "Ghostbuster's Gazette" -- (Or should that be "Mafia Busters?")
Sandra is yet again holding up beautifully ~ as your women characters always seem to do!
Maybe an edit here: "Les's over-confidant balloon" -- did you mean "confident/"
Onward~
(And I'm not behind anymore!
GREAT chapter.
Karenina
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Smiling here... Patrick was singing and having himself a good old time!
(Can we blame him? It's been a long time stuck in that mansion!)
I'm tickled every time the Judge appears... Les needs to start up a "Ghostbuster's Gazette" -- (Or should that be "Mafia Busters?")
Sandra is yet again holding up beautifully ~ as your women characters always seem to do!
Maybe an edit here: "Les's over-confidant balloon" -- did you mean "confident/"
Onward~
(And I'm not behind anymore!
GREAT chapter.
Karenina
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
fixed that spelling...and not thanks to Grammarly! lol I'm so happy that you are enjoying my humor with the ghosts and gangsters. It makes the story funny as it winds down. Thank you so much.
Love ya, Carol
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That touch of humor is a great juxtaposition to the very real struggle for redemption...
Comment from lyenochka
Poor Sandra. Even with ghosts appearing and substantiating her statements, she still has trouble convincing people, especially that sheriff. Hope they agree to help!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Poor Sandra. Even with ghosts appearing and substantiating her statements, she still has trouble convincing people, especially that sheriff. Hope they agree to help!
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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No one wants to believe in ghosts....but then neither did Sandra in the beginning. Guess they have to grow on you! LOL Thanks for the review, Helen,
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Esther Brown
As usual I am hanging on the edge waiting for the next installment. Carol you do a great job at creating the suspense. I did not see anything that needed fixing but have to admit I read it in a hurry. I am heading off on a 10 day Harley camping trip so won't be around for a bit. Enjoy! Esther
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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As usual I am hanging on the edge waiting for the next installment. Carol you do a great job at creating the suspense. I did not see anything that needed fixing but have to admit I read it in a hurry. I am heading off on a 10 day Harley camping trip so won't be around for a bit. Enjoy! Esther
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Have a FANTASTIC TRIP BUT STAY SAFE. i'LL MISS YOUR SMILING FACE. tHANKS FOR STOPPING TO READ THIS CHAPTER.
SMILES. cAROL
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I am back....to a heat wave! Feels good to be off the Harley and in AC again. I will catch up tomorrow.
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Glad you are back. Hope you had a great time. And I am glad you are safe.Just in time to catch up with the end of my story and the beginning of another one.
Love ya, Carol
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Beautifully written chapter and full of suspence and quite new adventures and new people have showen up for the ride. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Beautifully written chapter and full of suspence and quite new adventures and new people have showen up for the ride. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Wow, Iza....Thanks so much for enjoying the story and for giving me your shiny stars. I appreciate it very much. Have a great day.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
You are approaching an excellent conclusion for your story. I am eagerly anticipating how you handle the rest of the novel. I will be waiting for the next chapter of this exciting story.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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You are approaching an excellent conclusion for your story. I am eagerly anticipating how you handle the rest of the novel. I will be waiting for the next chapter of this exciting story.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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The ending has a little bit more of humor I guess. I wasn't ready to speed right into the ending without letting the ghosts have a little fun and the gangsters falling on their faces.LOl
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
I can certainly understand why they are bewildered! These are certainly not normal human interest stories, nor normal crime. Looking forward to the coming confrontation. Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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I can certainly understand why they are bewildered! These are certainly not normal human interest stories, nor normal crime. Looking forward to the coming confrontation. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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thanks so much for stopping by and for the review. Glas you enjoyed it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
I loved this episode, by necessity the ghosts in the mansion appear to quite a few including Jack, Michael, and more importantly to the people who matter, if this wasn't so hilarious, sometimes I wish God would appear to people, but I know their unbelief would refuse Him. Beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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I loved this episode, by necessity the ghosts in the mansion appear to quite a few including Jack, Michael, and more importantly to the people who matter, if this wasn't so hilarious, sometimes I wish God would appear to people, but I know their unbelief would refuse Him. Beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Glad you liked the humor.'m loving tossing it into the mix of the story. Thanks so much for the review and comments.
Smiles, Carol
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Well done