Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi
That swimming pool does look inviting. I like the words matching the color of the pool and the background color mimics the sun.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024

Thank you. It has been so nice to be out in the pool for a couple of hours a day nearly every day. I have a grandson that is mixed, and I have tanned so much that we are nearly the same shade - lol.

reply by dragonpoet on 08-Jul-2024

You're welcome, Monica.
Joan

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your poem does a wonderful job of sharing summer bliss. With just a few words you share relaxation and I could see the pool. It's a peaceful scene that I would love to be a part of!

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024

Thank you. I love the pool at my apartment complex. I try to spend a couple of hours a day in it. They do a wonderful job of keeping it maintained, so it is a pleasure to swim here.

Comment from Erika Whittle

Excellent

This is nice. It fits the season and the syllable count. It gives the feel of reminiscing about that moment by the pool. Short and sweet :)
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024

I love my pool! My apartment complex does a GREAT job keeping it maintained. Thanks for reviewing.