Chasing After Dreams
Living one dream as I work on another.3 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and well written 2-10-2 writing prompt entry. You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes on your dreams and the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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This is a very nice and well written 2-10-2 writing prompt entry. You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes on your dreams and the contest. Teri
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Thank you ever so much for your review. I greatly appreciate your encouraging words
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You are so welcome!!!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Nicely done. For me your words share a message about pursuing dreams and having hope that they will come true. I love that message. I thought you formatted this well as it is easy to read and very enjoyable.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Nicely done. For me your words share a message about pursuing dreams and having hope that they will come true. I love that message. I thought you formatted this well as it is easy to read and very enjoyable.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the encouraging review. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
That's a good idea. Sometimes you have the best ideas when you're children, and sometimes the best artists think like children.
Dumb question. Did you own a thoroughbred or want to own a thoroughbred when you were a child?
I wrote a poem recently. It's the same thing about a guy who kept chasing after dreams that weren't feasible But, he didn't have any replacement dreams to keep him occupied So, yours is a very similar theme to that.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
That's a good idea. Sometimes you have the best ideas when you're children, and sometimes the best artists think like children.
Dumb question. Did you own a thoroughbred or want to own a thoroughbred when you were a child?
I wrote a poem recently. It's the same thing about a guy who kept chasing after dreams that weren't feasible But, he didn't have any replacement dreams to keep him occupied So, yours is a very similar theme to that.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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I wanted to own them since I saw my first race in 1969. I was eleven at the time. I didn't realize this dream until 2020.
Your poem sounds very interesting. I hope to read it sometime.
I appreciate your viewing and encouraging comments.