2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from lyenochka
This is such a beautiful presentation! And I liked your dream-like poem which set the scene. I know how important the Mediterranean Sea is to you. When I tried to swim in it from Tel Aviv, I was shocked at how powerful the ocean was. The Pacific really does feel more "pacifico".
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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This is such a beautiful presentation! And I liked your dream-like poem which set the scene. I know how important the Mediterranean Sea is to you. When I tried to swim in it from Tel Aviv, I was shocked at how powerful the ocean was. The Pacific really does feel more "pacifico".
Comment Written 27-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Hehe.. yes, the pacific ocean is calmer. Thank you very much for your review, big sister.
Love
Marival
Comment from Ulla
Oh, Marival, I wish I had eleven stars for you. I think you know how much I love the ocean and I sailed the Med for many years. You just capture it's allurement and its beauty in this beautiful poem. Un abrazo, Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Oh, Marival, I wish I had eleven stars for you. I think you know how much I love the ocean and I sailed the Med for many years. You just capture it's allurement and its beauty in this beautiful poem. Un abrazo, Ulla xxx
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Ulla, it means a lot coming from you.
Besitos y abrazos
Marival
Comment from barbara.wilkey
When I was studying Spanish language and culture in Spain, many years ago, we would visit the Mediterranean Sea. It was gorgeous. I still remember. It would be nice going back. Maybe??? Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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When I was studying Spanish language and culture in Spain, many years ago, we would visit the Mediterranean Sea. It was gorgeous. I still remember. It would be nice going back. Maybe??? Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
i don't know where a lot of my poems come from either... my imagination can be quite strange at times LOL!
love that third stanza of a meandering wind... very cool image!
a great imagistic suite of 575 ebbing and flowing over the page
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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i don't know where a lot of my poems come from either... my imagination can be quite strange at times LOL!
love that third stanza of a meandering wind... very cool image!
a great imagistic suite of 575 ebbing and flowing over the page
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Shelley
Gypsy
Comment from Pamusart
Hi again Gypsy. It's me again I hope you are well
What a great image you have here.
Your poem is beautiful. I'm not sure what mother-hips means. I could only decide that mother has a big butt so that's where her hips would be mentioned But I'm not sure why
I want to be on that boat with the ocean spray hitting me in my face and the rest of my body cooling me off and getting salt spray in my mouth
I enjoyed reading your
poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Hi again Gypsy. It's me again I hope you are well
What a great image you have here.
Your poem is beautiful. I'm not sure what mother-hips means. I could only decide that mother has a big butt so that's where her hips would be mentioned But I'm not sure why
I want to be on that boat with the ocean spray hitting me in my face and the rest of my body cooling me off and getting salt spray in my mouth
I enjoyed reading your
poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Pam. Mother hips means a woman with wide hips... but in a good way. (*÷*)
Gypsy
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My thinking too
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Gypsy,
What can I say, but this poem is fantastic! I life the photos and your misty-blue lettering.
The words are passionate, using the Mediterranean Sea as a metaphor.
I stood barefoot in the Mediterranean Sea almost 50 years ago, and the warm water was so inviting and therapeutic.
Your poem brought back many memories for me.
Great poem, Gypsy.
Cindy
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Gypsy,
What can I say, but this poem is fantastic! I life the photos and your misty-blue lettering.
The words are passionate, using the Mediterranean Sea as a metaphor.
I stood barefoot in the Mediterranean Sea almost 50 years ago, and the warm water was so inviting and therapeutic.
Your poem brought back many memories for me.
Great poem, Gypsy.
Cindy
Comment Written 23-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Cindy
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
Well, you certainly know how to make a sea alluring. This couldn't have been any more sensual had you tried. I loved it. I don't care where or how you came up with it. It was fabulous. Gretchen
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Well, you certainly know how to make a sea alluring. This couldn't have been any more sensual had you tried. I loved it. I don't care where or how you came up with it. It was fabulous. Gretchen
Comment Written 23-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Very sexy, very sensual, Gypsy! The sea merges into the act of making love, sweeping up your reader in this magical scenario of lighthearted and delicious delight. All beautifully presented. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Very sexy, very sensual, Gypsy! The sea merges into the act of making love, sweeping up your reader in this magical scenario of lighthearted and delicious delight. All beautifully presented. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 23-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
This is real poetry Gypsy, sometimes people that read my work do understand the nuances of language, it does take time to read a little abstraction, I think that's why Jesus spoke in parables, or some of the bible books are symbolic, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : my boat('s) sails.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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This is real poetry Gypsy, sometimes people that read my work do understand the nuances of language, it does take time to read a little abstraction, I think that's why Jesus spoke in parables, or some of the bible books are symbolic, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : my boat('s) sails.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy
Gypsy