Boxing Night in Phuket
Stakes were high6 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
I guess he was too much of an amateur. I think his priorities were a little out of whack if a case of beer was worth more than his life. Unless he really thought he could beat a man that was so much bigger than him.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great weekend.
Joan
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Hi
I guess he was too much of an amateur. I think his priorities were a little out of whack if a case of beer was worth more than his life. Unless he really thought he could beat a man that was so much bigger than him.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Nice and concise. These are hard to do. I am still not through moving. I will be looking in from time to time until I am settled. I miss being here and all the friendship. Good work here. Karen
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Nice and concise. These are hard to do. I am still not through moving. I will be looking in from time to time until I am settled. I miss being here and all the friendship. Good work here. Karen
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a well structured little story, starting with elements of the fight, then giving the background, before announcing your surprise finale. Faultlessly expressed with good atmospheric detail. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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This is a well structured little story, starting with elements of the fight, then giving the background, before announcing your surprise finale. Faultlessly expressed with good atmospheric detail. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 21-Jun-2024
Comment from Begin Again
OOPs! Somewhere there was a miss calculation concerning the opponent. Knocked out and hospitalized... a hard road to travel. Good luck in the contest. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
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OOPs! Somewhere there was a miss calculation concerning the opponent. Knocked out and hospitalized... a hard road to travel. Good luck in the contest. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 21-Jun-2024
Comment from jessizero
This was a great one hundred word story for the writing prompt! I think you set the scene well and progressed the story effectively until that payoff at the end. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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This was a great one hundred word story for the writing prompt! I think you set the scene well and progressed the story effectively until that payoff at the end. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Thanks, Jessi
Comment from Gunner Lil
As my dad said, "No matter how good you think you are, there's always someone better."
Great story. An easy read with a nice pace. Thanks for sharing. Good luck.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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As my dad said, "No matter how good you think you are, there's always someone better."
Great story. An easy read with a nice pace. Thanks for sharing. Good luck.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your review and the six stars rating, Gunner