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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I'm sure that sunflower is shaking it's booty and what falls off, falls off. LOL Thank you for sharing another beautiful poem and presentations with us. You are spoiling us.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
    Thank you for the lovely review, Barbara

    Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
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Another fine poem, captures the yessence of summer and the season perfecly in a few short lines------shaking her seeds of summer, perfect, although her seeds of summer will be roasted this summer

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
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lol love the dancing in the wind and shaking the seeds - cool imagery of a dancing garden
don't really like sunflowers, but i liked this haiku and how you described them
nicely done.
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Life perpetuates through the effort of a singular blown wind. Isn't that truly amazing. You words and presentation are stunning.
Thanks for sharing.
RJ

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy
reply by RJ Heritage on 21-Jun-2024
    You're welcome
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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I'm not surprised you've personified the sunflower. It's such a character and a flirtatious one at that:)) I used to love seeing fields of them in France. A lovely, very evocative verse of summer. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
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She's lovely! And sunflowers remind us of summer and autumn with their huge heads so full of nutritious seeds! We love them more as we support Ukrainians as the sunflower represents them.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, big sis.

    Love you

    Marival
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
    I didn't know sunflowers represent Ukrainians. Thank you very much, big sister.

    love,

    marival
Comment from Ricky1024
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It's nice to see a well written haiku Mto which demonstrates the first day of course summer.
Your artwork was appropriate for this piece of poetry and thank you so very much for sharing.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, Dr Ricky

    Gypsy
Comment from royowen
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One can't help but love the sunflower who display their worship of the sun to bring life to themselves, it is fascinating to watch them, we should likewise be like them, worshiping the Son. beautifully written

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy
reply by royowen on 20-Jun-2024
    Most welcome Gypsy,