Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute poem about my favorite summer fruit. I love juicy red watermelons and cantaloupes. You used very cute and good descriptive words and very cute imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024

Thanks for the read and review. Enjoy your summer fruits.

Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan

Excellent

You splattered your watermelon all across my page, and I loved it!
Summer slap-stick and squidgy fun. So refreshingly nonsensical - great!
Can you eat them as well? :)

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024

Thanks for the read and review. Enjoy a slice or two this summer, and be careful where you spit the seeds.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This poem for the "summer fruit" writing prompt was fun and sweet. You got the syllable counts right, and the story in your poem was amusing. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024

Thanks for the read and review. Enjoy a slice or two this summer, and be careful where you spit the seeds.