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Things children must do but don't want to
2 total reviews
Comment from
Kennedy Jaymes
Author,
This is a wonderful poem that many people can most likely relate to. As I read, I could imagine parents reading this to their young children. Though my one note is about the font. I couldn't tell the difference between a coma and a period. But overall, this is a truly wonderful poem that I could imagine many enjoying!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
Thank you. I may go in and change the font to one that is more reader friendly. I appreciate your letting me know.
Comment from
NanaGaye
Great poem and picture, it is so like children, I had four of them. Always said to my children 'if you don't eat your dinner you don't get any desert' rhyming and humor is perfect. Good luck in the contest NanaGaye
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
LOL. I think we have all used that line once or twice. I appreciate your kind comments and the wonderful rating.
reply by NanaGaye on 22-Jun-2024
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