If I Sing
A love poem, like a duet, with 2 parts6 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Erika
I like the repetition of the rhymes and lines with slight changes to show a wish from a reality. A dream that has come true as the second stanza says.
Congrats on the contest win.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great weekend
Joan
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Hi Erika
I like the repetition of the rhymes and lines with slight changes to show a wish from a reality. A dream that has come true as the second stanza says.
Congrats on the contest win.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great weekend
Joan
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for the rating and positive review :) I'm glad you liked it
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Don't mention it, Erika.
Joan
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Congrats on your contest win, Erika! You've taken on a difficult challenge and clearly mastered it with your lovely, romantic love poem. I like the way you've used the same rhyming words in both stanzas (apart from the last lines). I think this gives your verse additional fluency and fun. Thank you for sharing your magical delight. Debbie
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Congrats on your contest win, Erika! You've taken on a difficult challenge and clearly mastered it with your lovely, romantic love poem. I like the way you've used the same rhyming words in both stanzas (apart from the last lines). I think this gives your verse additional fluency and fun. Thank you for sharing your magical delight. Debbie
Comment Written 21-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much! :)
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have 15 votes.
This contest was not easy seeing many key words like love , kiss and sexual terms were not allowed.
Your poem was inventive
Some of my favourite segments / lines were:
A twirl, a pivot, a song in tune
A sweet escape, a dream come true
Two butterflies fly through shades of blue.
Two pinkies crossed, seals the pact
A delightful read!
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have 15 votes.
This contest was not easy seeing many key words like love , kiss and sexual terms were not allowed.
Your poem was inventive
Some of my favourite segments / lines were:
A twirl, a pivot, a song in tune
A sweet escape, a dream come true
Two butterflies fly through shades of blue.
Two pinkies crossed, seals the pact
A delightful read!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it!
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Very much indeed.
I took a pic of it with my phone so
I can read it now and then at pleasure 😁
I forgot to mention that I?m a big fan of black backgrounds and the blue you used is striking.
Keep safe ! 🍀
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I'm flattered!
Oh this is actually my first time changing the color of the font and background. I'm glad it's well received!
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Author,
You followed the contest rules, and wrote a poem that truly shines. It's a difficult task to describe love and passion without using the words: kiss, soul, etc.
Awesome poem!
Good luck with this one!
Cindy
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Author,
You followed the contest rules, and wrote a poem that truly shines. It's a difficult task to describe love and passion without using the words: kiss, soul, etc.
Awesome poem!
Good luck with this one!
Cindy
Comment Written 19-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much Cindy :)
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is a mesmerizing picture that you have selected for a mesmerizing poem. This is very good and I'm sure you'll win the contest. I voted for it and it is well deserved. I love the simplistic beauty of your connectedness.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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This is a mesmerizing picture that you have selected for a mesmerizing poem. This is very good and I'm sure you'll win the contest. I voted for it and it is well deserved. I love the simplistic beauty of your connectedness.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate your review and your vote :)
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You are most welcome my friend.
Comment from jessizero
I think the second part was a perfect answer to the first part. You did a great job writing the love poem without the "forbidden" words. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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I think the second part was a perfect answer to the first part. You did a great job writing the love poem without the "forbidden" words. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Thank you