Comment from artisart4u

Exceptional

What we take in will determine our mind's reaction and our heart's ability to function properly.
You have the right amount of syllables for each line.
Good luck with your poem.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024

Thanks very much for taking the time to read and respond to my work. I hope you have a great day!

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very nice and well written 5 line poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used very good descriptive words and very neat imagery that goes well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024

Thanks very much for taking the time to read and respond to my work. I hope you have a great day!

Comment from ESOSTINE

Excellent

We learn more when we spend time to teach others, likewise, we prosper more when we do not withhold the hand of support to others. The message of the poem is vividly presented. Thanks for sharing your inspiration. Well done, and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024

Thanks very much for taking the time to read and respond to my work. I hope you have a great day!