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Comment from lyenochka
I think a calm after the storm would be best and even more welcome than the longing for a love that was not able to last. I really liked the descriptive and alliterative "rocked with raging lightning and thunder ".
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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I think a calm after the storm would be best and even more welcome than the longing for a love that was not able to last. I really liked the descriptive and alliterative "rocked with raging lightning and thunder ".
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful night.
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
An emotional read here with the storm portraying upheaval and a longing for calm to be resumed. The story evolves beautifully in its succinct form bringing a palpable sense of respite from the tumult. Well done, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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An emotional read here with the storm portraying upheaval and a longing for calm to be resumed. The story evolves beautifully in its succinct form bringing a palpable sense of respite from the tumult. Well done, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
i liked how you compared a violent storm with a rocky relationship
great imagery and word choices for both with smooth flow throughout
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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i liked how you compared a violent storm with a rocky relationship
great imagery and word choices for both with smooth flow throughout
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
I like the comparison of a tumultuous love affair to a storm. The thunder and lightning are used as the imagery of fights and fury. Beautifully written. Calm seas and blue skies are the goal. Gretchen
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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I like the comparison of a tumultuous love affair to a storm. The thunder and lightning are used as the imagery of fights and fury. Beautifully written. Calm seas and blue skies are the goal. Gretchen
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, a storm could be a metaphor for a tumult storm. I see that. There are a lot of similarities between the two. Thank you for sharing this wonderful presentation with us. Your talents shines.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Yes, a storm could be a metaphor for a tumult storm. I see that. There are a lot of similarities between the two. Thank you for sharing this wonderful presentation with us. Your talents shines.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
Yes, for those that have experienced the terror and majesty of a cyclone, the eye is the centre, and there's worse to come, but what a great metaphor for young love, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Yes, for those that have experienced the terror and majesty of a cyclone, the eye is the centre, and there's worse to come, but what a great metaphor for young love, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy
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Most welcome
Comment from patcelaw
This is wonderfully worded and it is presented beautifully. I wish you the very best with this writing and also I wish you the best with all of your writing. May you have a very pleasant week. Patricia .
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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This is wonderfully worded and it is presented beautifully. I wish you the very best with this writing and also I wish you the best with all of your writing. May you have a very pleasant week. Patricia .
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy