the end 2-5-2
end of the world in 2-5-2 words4 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you have two votes now.
I do think humanity will destroy itself and once we are out of the way Mother Nature over time will regenerate and flourish again.
We have not learned one important lesson yet: we can't live without mother natures help
She on the other hand will be just fine without us.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Ciao mystery poet, you have two votes now.
I do think humanity will destroy itself and once we are out of the way Mother Nature over time will regenerate and flourish again.
We have not learned one important lesson yet: we can't live without mother natures help
She on the other hand will be just fine without us.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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you might be right.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jake,
This is a quick and effective poem about how climate change will ruin the earth and make it impossible to live here. It is sad that some people don't believe it exists. Nice choice of artwork to show destruction.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Hi Jake,
This is a quick and effective poem about how climate change will ruin the earth and make it impossible to live here. It is sad that some people don't believe it exists. Nice choice of artwork to show destruction.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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thanks a lot in Oregon for the summer. Hot here but not too bad and the fire season has not started yet
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
This says a lot in just a few words. I enjoyed reading, however I think world is just one syllable. So you might want to add a syllable to the second line. Other than that, it's great and has a nice picture too!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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This says a lot in just a few words. I enjoyed reading, however I think world is just one syllable. So you might want to add a syllable to the second line. Other than that, it's great and has a nice picture too!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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i'll look at that thanks
Comment from Mintybee
This 2-5-2 poem is a good summary of climate change. As fires increase and droughts get worse, it's hard not to focus on how this might end. Putting that into nine syllables is quite the challenge, but I think you did well. I keep trusting Jesus has a plan and will return before the world ends on its own, but until then I keep doing the little things I can do to help.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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This 2-5-2 poem is a good summary of climate change. As fires increase and droughts get worse, it's hard not to focus on how this might end. Putting that into nine syllables is quite the challenge, but I think you did well. I keep trusting Jesus has a plan and will return before the world ends on its own, but until then I keep doing the little things I can do to help.
Mintybee
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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thanks a lot