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Birthdays

The key to a longer life

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Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi
This seems an obvious fact. Or are you saying that each birthday makes you stronger and so you can possibly live longer than you were meant to?
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a wondrous weekend.
Joan

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
    Thanks Joan. It?s just a joke. Take care
reply by dragonpoet on 15-Jun-2024
    No problem, Jeni.
    Joan
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the Short Poem writing prompt. A humorous view on how to live a longer life. I addition to your way of thinking...the longer you live, the more birthdays you will have, so each sort of helps the other. i like it when things work out like that. Enjoyed. Thanks for the smile.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
    Many thanks Marilyn
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
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I think I would be inclined to believe this one..haha! I had to laugh! I very much enjoyed the color scheme and graph if you use for this too. The overall showing is right. Best of luck to you going forward.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
    Thanks Nicole