Comment from
jessizero
I enjoyed the repetition of some of the lines in this poem. This was a great love poem. I'm assuming it's free verse, but I could be wrong. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
It's supposed to be free verse. I didn't try to structure it, though some of the lines kind of look that way. I do thank you so much for reading and commenting on it.
Comment from
patcelaw
This is a very nicely written and presented love poem. I enjoyed listening to it very much. It flows very well when it is read aloud. May you have a lovely day and a wonderful weekend. Patricia .
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
Thank you. I try to get them to flow well, though I don't always succeed.