The Invitation
A shy suitor6 total reviews
Comment from Nicki.B
I really like this poem. Short and sweet buy tells a beautiful story! It stories like those turn into the beat love matches. Unassuming and shy but it all came together in the end. Happy days!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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I really like this poem. Short and sweet buy tells a beautiful story! It stories like those turn into the beat love matches. Unassuming and shy but it all came together in the end. Happy days!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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You are very kind. Thank you.
Comment from royowen
Yep, that's like when one is young one can think that a girl is way out of his league, but no one knows what form attraction can take, and we can be surprised, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Yep, that's like when one is young one can think that a girl is way out of his league, but no one knows what form attraction can take, and we can be surprised, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your kind review.
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Pleasure
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Four lines to create emotion That is a very tiny four lined. You portrayed emotion. Bravo
I enjoyed your poem very much
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Four lines to create emotion That is a very tiny four lined. You portrayed emotion. Bravo
I enjoyed your poem very much
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
He was slow to ask me out
He thought that I'd say no
But I surprised him
I said that I would go
Cute, light-hearted poem. I think a graphic would help a lot here!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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He was slow to ask me out
He thought that I'd say no
But I surprised him
I said that I would go
Cute, light-hearted poem. I think a graphic would help a lot here!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This four-line poem, The Invitation, has the proper formatting and gives the surprising response to the suitor who goes through the routine of asking her out but finds that a door has opened.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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This four-line poem, The Invitation, has the proper formatting and gives the surprising response to the suitor who goes through the routine of asking her out but finds that a door has opened.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your insightful response.
Comment from RodG
How common was this scenario among young people just beginning to date. The shy guy, the girl waiting to be asked out. Of course, today the girl would not hesitate to do the asking. Rod
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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How common was this scenario among young people just beginning to date. The shy guy, the girl waiting to be asked out. Of course, today the girl would not hesitate to do the asking. Rod
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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She was probably a bit shy herself. Thank you.