The Tainted
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Conversation with Demi"A fantasy story following hunter Taya
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Comment from jim vecchio
You continue to progress well with your continued story. The only advice I can offer is, for those who come in late, perhaps a short synopsis at the beginning and there or at the end, possibly a small list of the characters. Many novel writers here do this.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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You continue to progress well with your continued story. The only advice I can offer is, for those who come in late, perhaps a short synopsis at the beginning and there or at the end, possibly a small list of the characters. Many novel writers here do this.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the advice
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Just relating what some hve done. Write according to rour writer's voice.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
I wasn't in a good mood. I know his intentions are good but I still feel dejected. Staying alive is definitely my priority but it wasn't a good feeling to be so poorly assessed. What he said wasn't wrong but it's left me feeling like a burden rather than a partner. I decided to try and sleep the feeling off.
I can sense the frustration behind this. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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I wasn't in a good mood. I know his intentions are good but I still feel dejected. Staying alive is definitely my priority but it wasn't a good feeling to be so poorly assessed. What he said wasn't wrong but it's left me feeling like a burden rather than a partner. I decided to try and sleep the feeling off.
I can sense the frustration behind this. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Thank you