Midnight Ride
Justice is non-negotiable.24 total reviews
Comment from wilkswrites
I LOVE IT!!!
This made me laugh out loud for real. I enjoyed reading this short but powerful piece because it packs a punch at the end. I also liked that the character was a female and prayerful. She did what she had to do and I ain't mad at her.
Loved it.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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I LOVE IT!!!
This made me laugh out loud for real. I enjoyed reading this short but powerful piece because it packs a punch at the end. I also liked that the character was a female and prayerful. She did what she had to do and I ain't mad at her.
Loved it.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Many thanks, wilkswrites. I appreciate the tremendous review and six stars. My apologies for the late reply; I don't check the site as much as I once did.
It's great to have a new friend here on FanStory! - Jamison
Comment from Spitfire
You certainly had a gift for writing short scenarios with unexpected endings. Details of Claire's physical appearance support her emotional response to the job at hand.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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You certainly had a gift for writing short scenarios with unexpected endings. Details of Claire's physical appearance support her emotional response to the job at hand.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Shari. Your six stars are a wonderful surprise. I don't know how much market there is for flash, but I do enjoy it. I appreciate your review very much. - Jamison
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Congrats on your first place win, Jamison! As ever, this is beautifully presented with this distinctly haunting flash fiction about revenge. Wow, what a winner, conveyed so clearly and perfectly within the limited word count. The story builds up to its climax with suspense and intrigue. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Congrats on your first place win, Jamison! As ever, this is beautifully presented with this distinctly haunting flash fiction about revenge. Wow, what a winner, conveyed so clearly and perfectly within the limited word count. The story builds up to its climax with suspense and intrigue. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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As always, I am grateful for your kindness and support, Debbie. It's been quite a "ride" with the contests recently. I'll just enjoy it while it lasts, because it likely won't. (smile)
Take care. - Jamison
Comment from Teri7
Jamison, This is a really great 100 Word Dash. You used great descriptive words and imagery. I am glad I found this and was able to read it.
Congratulations on your win my friend! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Jamison, This is a really great 100 Word Dash. You used great descriptive words and imagery. I am glad I found this and was able to read it.
Congratulations on your win my friend! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Teri. I've been blessed with a few contest winners lately. I will get back to my book now and focus on its completion. It's been fun working on the short stories. - Jamison
Comment from Sharon Elwell
Now THAT is an unexpected twist! Good job on creating a complete situation and finishing it in a satisfying way. Pretty sure this review will have to be longer than your story...
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Now THAT is an unexpected twist! Good job on creating a complete situation and finishing it in a satisfying way. Pretty sure this review will have to be longer than your story...
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Hi Sharon. Thank you for this wonderful review! It's quite an honor to get these six stars. It's especially nice to have a new friend here on FanStory. Take care, and have a great weekend! - Jamison
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Now that's a fine piece of flash fiction, in more ways than one. Congratulations on your first place win. It's definitely a winner in my book. The surprise ending is what's always the hardest to pull off on short pieces, but you did an amazing job.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Now that's a fine piece of flash fiction, in more ways than one. Congratulations on your first place win. It's definitely a winner in my book. The surprise ending is what's always the hardest to pull off on short pieces, but you did an amazing job.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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What an incredible review, Rhonda. I am grateful. Thank you. - Jamison
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You are a talented writer!!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This didn't come into my PM box. I'm guessing because its a writing prompt entry. I'm glad I was searching for something to read and happened to see it. This is an excellent write. It has all the necessary ingredients for a short story.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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This didn't come into my PM box. I'm guessing because its a writing prompt entry. I'm glad I was searching for something to read and happened to see it. This is an excellent write. It has all the necessary ingredients for a short story.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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You're right; it was a blind contest. I don't always promote the contest entries. I am glad you found it. Thanks for the review.
I am going to promote 2 more blind contest winners today or tomorrow. I hope you get a chance to comment. Take care, Barbara. - Jamison
Comment from Terry Broxson
Jamison, well, no wonder you had a winner with this one. That is certainly one way to deal with someone who apparently was up to some nasty blackmail. I am not sure how many of us would ask for absolution, but it does indicate she is a good person. Very well done. Terry.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Jamison, well, no wonder you had a winner with this one. That is certainly one way to deal with someone who apparently was up to some nasty blackmail. I am not sure how many of us would ask for absolution, but it does indicate she is a good person. Very well done. Terry.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Yep, forgiveness would have been a better choice than absolution. Edited. I'm surprised others didn't mention that. Great catch!
Thanks for the great review and six stars. - Jamison
Comment from Jim Wile
Ah, justice to the blackmailer! I guess he picked the wrong gal to blackmail. Great job with this flash story, Jamison. I'm not surprised this won the contest, as it is a perfect flash story with all the elements and a great surprise ending.
Just curious: Are you still planning to continue with River City at some point?
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Ah, justice to the blackmailer! I guess he picked the wrong gal to blackmail. Great job with this flash story, Jamison. I'm not surprised this won the contest, as it is a perfect flash story with all the elements and a great surprise ending.
Just curious: Are you still planning to continue with River City at some point?
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Hi, Jim. Thanks for stopping by this morning. I appreciate the review.
Yes, River City will continue. Thanks for asking. I have been having fun with the flash stories and the contests recently. It's time to get back to business now... Look for a new chapter soon. - Jamison
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Great!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Congratulations on your win with this 100 Word Dash entry. Very nicely written and compact with a surprising twist ending that was very satisfying to this reader. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Congratulations on your win with this 100 Word Dash entry. Very nicely written and compact with a surprising twist ending that was very satisfying to this reader. Nicely done.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn. It was fun creating this one. Take care. - Jamison