mosquito attack
Extended Haiku 25 syllable contest (incessant buzzing)6 total reviews
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
They truly are the unruly guests/ pests of summer aren't they?! Good job! These poems can be difficult! Noisy and a pain for sure! Best of luck going forward with your work.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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They truly are the unruly guests/ pests of summer aren't they?! Good job! These poems can be difficult! Noisy and a pain for sure! Best of luck going forward with your work.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thanks Nicole for your review. Those mosquitos feast on me regularly ?ugh, scratch!
Comment from Erika Whittle
Well this is creative. It perfectly portrays the annoyance that mosquitos are. I like that you added sound effects. Says a lot in one word. Good job and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Well this is creative. It perfectly portrays the annoyance that mosquitos are. I like that you added sound effects. Says a lot in one word. Good job and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thanks Erica. Those mosquitos have a feast with me (-;
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lol I feel your pain
Comment from Bryce 1
I felt a summer evening before I finished the poem. Lord knows I have been the one in this poem before. This poem speaks to me and reminds me of the beauty of even an irritating moment like this one.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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I felt a summer evening before I finished the poem. Lord knows I have been the one in this poem before. This poem speaks to me and reminds me of the beauty of even an irritating moment like this one.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Bryce,
We are almost summer, but those mosquitos still feast on me and you!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 25 syllable poetry Contest. oh my God, that isn't a mosquito, it's a bomber jet! Good poem, I am itching just reading about it! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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An excellent entry for the 25 syllable poetry Contest. oh my God, that isn't a mosquito, it's a bomber jet! Good poem, I am itching just reading about it! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thanks Marilyn!
Those mosquitos are regular dive bombers for me (-; I do get welts from their bites.
Comment from jessizero
This was a great poem! You got the syllable count right for the contest, and your story in the poem was very funny and relatable. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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This was a great poem! You got the syllable count right for the contest, and your story in the poem was very funny and relatable. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Jessi!
Those mosquitos do like me - whenever or wherever I am.
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They like me, too!
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We must be ?sweet? (or they like our ?sweat? (-;
Comment from zaraduck6
This was a fun poem! I really like the idea. I see this is a contest entry for the 25 syllable poem, however, I'm counting 26 syllables. Perhaps you added an extra syllable? Or am I just counting it wrong? Either way, a great poem. Well done! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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This was a fun poem! I really like the idea. I see this is a contest entry for the 25 syllable poem, however, I'm counting 26 syllables. Perhaps you added an extra syllable? Or am I just counting it wrong? Either way, a great poem. Well done! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Zara,
Please count again. "Evening" may sound like three but the dictionary says two syllables.
Thanks for your review!