Burnt Out
A hot romance!2 total reviews
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
Ouch! I can feel the pain and disappointment in this. The graphic goes along with it nicely as well. It sucks to fall in love and have the same person hurt you badly.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Ouch! I can feel the pain and disappointment in this. The graphic goes along with it nicely as well. It sucks to fall in love and have the same person hurt you badly.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Nicole.
Comment from kahpot
Love what you have written and saying in this poem, but if I may
"Fireman for hire!" I believe is only four syllables, may need to edit this line, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Love what you have written and saying in this poem, but if I may
"Fireman for hire!" I believe is only four syllables, may need to edit this line, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Hi Kapot. Thank you so much. I did research the syllables :) 'Fire' can be i or 2 - hire is 2. Technically should be ok, but maybe I'll still be chucked out :)