Assurance Reignited
Dedicated to my sister.2 total reviews
Comment from Esther Brown
This was beautiful Allison. Only thing, can you check the spelling on incessantly? My brain may be spelling wrong or maybe I don't know the word you used. That is a beautiful entry and I hope you win. Esther
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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This was beautiful Allison. Only thing, can you check the spelling on incessantly? My brain may be spelling wrong or maybe I don't know the word you used. That is a beautiful entry and I hope you win. Esther
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you for your kind words. I did fix incessantly. I'm not quite sure how I missed that! Thank you for spotting it 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is such a sweet, caring verse dedicated to your sister! I love your imagery in the first stanza and your comparison of her to the sun. Did you mean 'incessantly' in the second stanza? I don't know if she's an only sister but you're clearly very attached to her and are mourning her loss of spirit and fire. Hopefully this verse and your kindness will help to reignite her fire. She's lucky to have you, Allison. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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This is such a sweet, caring verse dedicated to your sister! I love your imagery in the first stanza and your comparison of her to the sun. Did you mean 'incessantly' in the second stanza? I don't know if she's an only sister but you're clearly very attached to her and are mourning her loss of spirit and fire. Hopefully this verse and your kindness will help to reignite her fire. She's lucky to have you, Allison. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you for your kind review, she is my older sister and it is just the two of us. She used to be so vibrant and unfortunately has lost that over the years. Hoping to get some of that back this summer when I see her ❤️. I fixed Incessantly 😊 thank you!
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Good for you, Allison! I'm one of two sisters and, sadly, I've rather given up with mine. But you might have spurred me on to get in touch:) Thank you.