Comment from
Sallyo
So, now he has a new pet! Maybe he should have turned him into a bat instead. The abab rhyme bounces along and yes...it's short! If not for the allergy some publishers have to wizards, this could make the basis for a picture book.
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work.
With kind regards
Comment from
Alexandra Trovato
This is a good poem for the challenge. It has good rhyming and is presented nicely. I enjoyed reviewing it. Thank your for sharing it. Best wishes. Alex
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. Glad you enjoyed it.
With kind regards