Comment from Barry Penfold

Excellent

Very clever and entertaining poem. Love the image. Thanks for sharing and this should close to a win. It is a winner in my book. Take care and have a most wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 27-May-2024

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reply by the author on 27-May-2024

Thank you so much for this wonderful review. :)

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I think you did a great job with this entry for the "magic poem" writing prompt. You did a great job with your rhymes, and your story was sweet. I'm glad things worked out for your characters. :) Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 27-May-2024

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reply by the author on 27-May-2024

Thank you for this terrific review, it means a lot to me. :)

Comment from Sallyo

Excellent

I like this with the verse and reverse and the spellbound pun. It's a lot of fun and rhymes and has a good meter. The pic you picked is also just right for the piece.

 Comment Written 27-May-2024

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reply by the author on 27-May-2024

Thank you, l appreciate you reading my poem and for this nice review. :)

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

What a delightful tale of love and magic! The rhymes and clever wordplay add to the charm of the story. The story about Alakabee and Marie is wonderfully told. Your poem is so imaginative and unique. And, yes, even romantic. Well done!

 Comment Written 26-May-2024

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reply by the author on 27-May-2024

Thank you for this terrific review, it means a lot to me. :)