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Comment from Rachelle Allen
Absolutely lovely, and made even more beautiful with the artwork you chose to accentuate it. I very much enjoyed FEELING this beautiful creation. xoxox
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Absolutely lovely, and made even more beautiful with the artwork you chose to accentuate it. I very much enjoyed FEELING this beautiful creation. xoxox
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you very much
Gypsy
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi MariVal.
This is a well done senryu that tells of the love a child sees in her mother's eyes when she looks in them. It works both ways.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of your weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Hi MariVal.
This is a well done senryu that tells of the love a child sees in her mother's eyes when she looks in them. It works both ways.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of your weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you very much
Gypsy
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My pleasure, MariVal.
Joan
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very good artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-You did a good job with the senyru.
-You set the scene very well as you
recall being in your mother's arms.
-A good satori line about how
you see yourself reflected in her eyes.
-Well done.
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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-Very good artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-You did a good job with the senyru.
-You set the scene very well as you
recall being in your mother's arms.
-A good satori line about how
you see yourself reflected in her eyes.
-Well done.
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
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You are welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from lyenochka
A mother's love is seen in her actions and her eyes. Children can see themselves as the apple of their mother's eyes. I like your way of expressing that connection.
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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A mother's love is seen in her actions and her eyes. Children can see themselves as the apple of their mother's eyes. I like your way of expressing that connection.
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Love
Marival
Comment from barbara.wilkey
In a loving mother's arms is the best place to be. Thank you for sharing this poem and presentation with us. I enjoyed reading. I felt emotion as I read.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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In a loving mother's arms is the best place to be. Thank you for sharing this poem and presentation with us. I enjoyed reading. I felt emotion as I read.
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was another very sentimental poem. A mother usually embraces her role fiercely in regards to protecting her children. Yet there is nothing more gentle than a mother's touch. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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This was another very sentimental poem. A mother usually embraces her role fiercely in regards to protecting her children. Yet there is nothing more gentle than a mother's touch. Gretchen
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
It is such a beautiful thing when you could see yourself in the eyes of one who love you dearly. I think it is known that parents see themselves in their children's eyes, but how special it is when a child can see himself in the eyes of his mother.
RJ
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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It is such a beautiful thing when you could see yourself in the eyes of one who love you dearly. I think it is known that parents see themselves in their children's eyes, but how special it is when a child can see himself in the eyes of his mother.
RJ
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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You?re welcome
Comment from Douglas Goff
Another beautifully well-done piece of artistry. I think the rich red gave it an elegant, albeit sweet, feel.
Very nice work! I liked this one. You are such a talent to pull off so much with so few words.
D
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Another beautifully well-done piece of artistry. I think the rich red gave it an elegant, albeit sweet, feel.
Very nice work! I liked this one. You are such a talent to pull off so much with so few words.
D
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
aww so sweet... if you have a close relationship with your mom, you are so lucky! not everyone feels that
a great picture and senryu combination
good imagistic word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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aww so sweet... if you have a close relationship with your mom, you are so lucky! not everyone feels that
a great picture and senryu combination
good imagistic word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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My mom died when I was 10. We were very close.
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
There's really nothing like parental love, it tends to shape the very cultural framework of our lives. How else would we understand what life is all about, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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There's really nothing like parental love, it tends to shape the very cultural framework of our lives. How else would we understand what life is all about, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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Welcome