Friendship's Picnic
A Bear, a Rabbit, and a Squirrel enjoy a perfect day4 total reviews
Comment from zanya
A-h-h -what a lovely, reassuring, comforting tale and told in rhyme, no small feat for a story format - three happy 'pals' - bear, rabbit and squirrel-picnics are simply wonderful.
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A-h-h -what a lovely, reassuring, comforting tale and told in rhyme, no small feat for a story format - three happy 'pals' - bear, rabbit and squirrel-picnics are simply wonderful.
Comment Written 25-May-2024
Comment from Teri7
This was a very enjoyable rhyming tale you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words to go with the words required. The only thing missing was a picture, but you had such great imagery from your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This was a very enjoyable rhyming tale you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words to go with the words required. The only thing missing was a picture, but you had such great imagery from your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 24-May-2024
Comment from jessizero
This was an adorable rhyming story. I appreciate that you bolded the rhyming words to make the rhyme more obvious. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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This was an adorable rhyming story. I appreciate that you bolded the rhyming words to make the rhyme more obvious. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-May-2024
Comment from Tina Crute
I bet you saw this poem play out in your head? I say that because its so vivid with conversation. When I write rhyming stories, that happens. They have a life of their own! I enjoyed your story. It's creative and happy!
Good luck in the contest!
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I bet you saw this poem play out in your head? I say that because its so vivid with conversation. When I write rhyming stories, that happens. They have a life of their own! I enjoyed your story. It's creative and happy!
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 24-May-2024