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A third party for President 2024

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Comment from kahpot
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Defense the wall, how very clever, I think there is a double meaning about the tie, but have not picked it up yet! I will give this another read, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 27-May-2024


reply by the author on 27-May-2024
    Just banter about the tie, I'm afraid. Thank you for giving this a look.
Comment from Gloria ....
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This is terrific political satire. I shall be paying attention to the ramblings of this gaggle of cans and can'ts.

Of course I got a good laugh at the end about de fence.

Much enjoyed. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 25-May-2024


reply by the author on 25-May-2024
    Thank you, Gloria, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from jim vecchio
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I know this country has gone way downhill, but I sure hope we aren't getting the president we deserve because of it. Thank you for another humorous campaign installment.

 Comment Written 25-May-2024


reply by the author on 25-May-2024
    We have spun back fifty years to the time when George Wallace was on the ballot.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
    We have spun back fifty years to the time when George Wallace was on the ballot.
reply by jim vecchio on 26-May-2024
    I was thinking the same thing. Fitzgerald: "So we drift on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly to the past".
Comment from lyenochka
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Yes, Tom Sawyer was a really good politician in that he could make doing his job for him something to be desired. I don't see any of these candidates doing that but I liked AA's poem!

Shouldn't Cabal be "Cabala" ?
I hope you have a face off between RFC (AOC) and MAGA Molly (MTG).

 Comment Written 25-May-2024


reply by the author on 25-May-2024
    I hope these characters get fleshed out.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
    I hope these characters get fleshed out.
Comment from nomi338
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That is it. We are doomed because the two adults in the room are arguing over a spot soiled tie, who it belongs to and who spilled gravy on it. Ned wants to lead a horse to water but has no idea what to do once they get there. We are done for. Someone please help.

 Comment Written 25-May-2024


reply by the author on 25-May-2024
    I will drop a love bomb soon.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
    I will drop a love bomb soon.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
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OMGosh, I wish I had a ten star to give you for this one. Bill this is priceless. What a fun way to throw a little shade at the elections, You should write for the Tonight Show. LOL... awesome, awesome, awesome.

So I happen to know we are on the opposite ends of voting, but I don't care. I don't judge my friends by anything that they choose to do, well maybe murder. Haha! All I know is that this shows great imagination and talent and I loved it. Thanks Bill for the entertainment. Can't wait for the next one....Love, Debi

 Comment Written 25-May-2024


reply by the author on 25-May-2024
    Today?s 50/50 society deserves this choice.
reply by Debi Pick Marquette on 25-May-2024
    I agree with you and commend you for an awesome job on this.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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I must say that these guys sound more coherent than what we currently have going on in Government. i'm not sure who owns the tie but that gravy was definitely from the State Street Diner's meatloaf special.

 Comment Written 25-May-2024


reply by the author on 25-May-2024
    The tie was from Goodwill and came with the stain.
reply by Marilyn Hamilton on 25-May-2024
    So they told you!!!!!