Clumsy Fish
A short silly rhyming poem2 total reviews
Comment from JanPerry
I'm glad his bow tie stayed dry, but why was it dry if he went into water? Something deeper to ponder. It is simple and sweet not ground breaking though.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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I'm glad his bow tie stayed dry, but why was it dry if he went into water? Something deeper to ponder. It is simple and sweet not ground breaking though.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work.
With kind regards
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Okay, yes, you have accomplished your goal. This is SILLY. You share a funny picture of this bow tie fish. The playful tone and imagery of the fish attending a party in Mumbai was so silly it was funny!
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Okay, yes, you have accomplished your goal. This is SILLY. You share a funny picture of this bow tie fish. The playful tone and imagery of the fish attending a party in Mumbai was so silly it was funny!
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work.
With kind regards