Loneliness
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Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Melissa,
This free verse poem makes the reader feel the grief and loneliness of one who has lost a spouse or a break up of a relationship before one moves on.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
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Hi Melissa,
This free verse poem makes the reader feel the grief and loneliness of one who has lost a spouse or a break up of a relationship before one moves on.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
Comment from Begin Again
Definitely nailed this one! I have been feeling that emptiness of late and stare at the sky hoping he is watching over me too. Perfect wording!
Smiles, Carol
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Definitely nailed this one! I have been feeling that emptiness of late and stare at the sky hoping he is watching over me too. Perfect wording!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 23-May-2024
Comment from Ric Myworld
Your correlation between loneliness and the distant stars seems to stretch the vastness like soft taffy, growing farther apart with each pull, a certain sweetness lingering on my tastebuds. :-) Thanks for sharing.
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Your correlation between loneliness and the distant stars seems to stretch the vastness like soft taffy, growing farther apart with each pull, a certain sweetness lingering on my tastebuds. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-May-2024
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Many a kiss had gone amiss for me. I see I was not alone as a teen, young man or old adolescent. I see you posted a second read, so let me see what's there.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Many a kiss had gone amiss for me. I see I was not alone as a teen, young man or old adolescent. I see you posted a second read, so let me see what's there.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Ahhh I really must give you a big ol thank you for using your valuable time to stop by and leave not just one but two lovely reviews :)
Thank you, Tom
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from jim vecchio
Someone as wonderful and sensitive as you should never feel lonely, though I admit it's not always easy for me, also. But, God has blessed us with a wonderful world of promise.
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Someone as wonderful and sensitive as you should never feel lonely, though I admit it's not always easy for me, also. But, God has blessed us with a wonderful world of promise.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem beautifully captures the sense of longing and connection that persists despite death or great distance. The imagery of the night sky is a perfect metaphor for the distance between you and him. It shares a sense of vastness and eternity. I thought your word choices are powerful. Like the touch of lips and the tingling of your body - just makes this so emotionally charged. Well done.
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Your poem beautifully captures the sense of longing and connection that persists despite death or great distance. The imagery of the night sky is a perfect metaphor for the distance between you and him. It shares a sense of vastness and eternity. I thought your word choices are powerful. Like the touch of lips and the tingling of your body - just makes this so emotionally charged. Well done.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
Comment from shelley kaye
cool pic of hands of hope r e a c h i n g for the crescent moon. . .
interesting line breaks, but they flowed smoothly with thought-provoking pauses
nice work
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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cool pic of hands of hope r e a c h i n g for the crescent moon. . .
interesting line breaks, but they flowed smoothly with thought-provoking pauses
nice work
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 21-May-2024