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Monster

A story of a hunter and prey

2 total reviews 
Comment from Pamusart
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Looks looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.!

I can't agree at putting a trophy on a wall makes any sense whatsoever. I have no issue with killing a deer for me which I'm assuming is what you did. It's on the wall.

Well done. Thank you for sharing


 Comment Written 21-May-2024


reply by the author on 21-May-2024
    Well I didn't do it but that is what happens in the story. It's about how animals see a hunter. Thank you for the review
Comment from Julie Helms
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Hunting is definitely more visceral than say factory farming of cows, but ultimately kinder. An interesting flash stylizing the narrator as a monster in the eyes of the deer. An original concept. Best of luck!
Julie

 Comment Written 21-May-2024


reply by the author on 21-May-2024
    Thank you!