Fish Upon A Star(fish)
Purely for FUN!13 total reviews
Comment from Jill D
This is my favourite type of poetry. It is funny and clever and each line put a smile on my face. The writer obviously has a wonderful sense of humor.
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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This is my favourite type of poetry. It is funny and clever and each line put a smile on my face. The writer obviously has a wonderful sense of humor.
Comment Written 18-May-2024
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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Thank you, Jill. That's a great compliment :)
Comment from nancyjam
Yes, you get a six for this one. I am amazed at how you were able to
mention so many different fish and ocean inhabitants and work them in hilariously to the narrative. Very, very clever. I had fun reading it.
Very entertaining.
Nancy
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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Yes, you get a six for this one. I am amazed at how you were able to
mention so many different fish and ocean inhabitants and work them in hilariously to the narrative. Very, very clever. I had fun reading it.
Very entertaining.
Nancy
Comment Written 17-May-2024
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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Wow, thank you, Nancy. I'm glad it gave you a chuckle :)
Comment from Charism7
It's funny and entertaining. I like how you play the words that relate to.marine creatures. It's my first time reading a poem with this structure. Though makes me smile. Thanks.
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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It's funny and entertaining. I like how you play the words that relate to.marine creatures. It's my first time reading a poem with this structure. Though makes me smile. Thanks.
Comment Written 17-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from gansach
This one made me laugh out loud. It is very cleverly done and I enjoyed it very much. I love humor in poems and try to use it often, so I really admire a poem (and poet) with a good sense of humor. Brava!
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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This one made me laugh out loud. It is very cleverly done and I enjoyed it very much. I love humor in poems and try to use it often, so I really admire a poem (and poet) with a good sense of humor. Brava!
Comment Written 17-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Thank you, gansach :)
Comment from GoWiSt
Nice, colorful, apt complementary picture art choice.
"soon showing me your winkles.
I showed you my crabs." What, and you both remained unblind?? LOL
"I felt your mussels." Uh, pre or post cooking? LOL
Haha! This was such a fun reed! :-))
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Nice, colorful, apt complementary picture art choice.
"soon showing me your winkles.
I showed you my crabs." What, and you both remained unblind?? LOL
"I felt your mussels." Uh, pre or post cooking? LOL
Haha! This was such a fun reed! :-))
Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Thank you. Glad it gave you a chuckle! :)
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Oh my goodness. All these fish puns have me feeling rather crabby with a bit of a haddock. I will take some Tylenol and maybe smoke some sea weed. Great job getting all those sea creatures in your poem! Puns are my favorite. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Oh my goodness. All these fish puns have me feeling rather crabby with a bit of a haddock. I will take some Tylenol and maybe smoke some sea weed. Great job getting all those sea creatures in your poem! Puns are my favorite. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn :). Don't overdo the sea weed haha :)
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well you certainly did have fun, Shirley, and brought a bream of sunshine here! You're clearly a passionate Piscean because the range of your knowledge is most impressive (I had to look up Aholeholes! But what a great one!). Loved the very English story you told too! Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Well you certainly did have fun, Shirley, and brought a bream of sunshine here! You're clearly a passionate Piscean because the range of your knowledge is most impressive (I had to look up Aholeholes! But what a great one!). Loved the very English story you told too! Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Haha, thank you, Debbie. Is it a terning point? No :) :) :) x
Comment from palane oumar
Bon et plaisant.J ai trouvé intéressant ce poème et j ai éprouvé de la joie en le lisant.Comme je viens de découvrir je suis très intéressé et souhaite me lancer.
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reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Bon et plaisant.J ai trouvé intéressant ce poème et j ai éprouvé de la joie en le lisant.Comme je viens de découvrir je suis très intéressé et souhaite me lancer.
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Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Thank you
Comment from royowen
What a clever person you are Shirley Ann, all those precious words and you joined them cleverly together, and wove them all into a marvellous poem, well done Shirley Ann blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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What a clever person you are Shirley Ann, all those precious words and you joined them cleverly together, and wove them all into a marvellous poem, well done Shirley Ann blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Thank you so much, Roy. This was just a bit of fun :)
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Well done
Comment from Mark Jackson
A fun story created in poetry form with a lot of sea-life puns. I found the whole thing entertaining and wondered at your skill of repeated added more and more depth to the piece with each added pun. Well written.
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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A fun story created in poetry form with a lot of sea-life puns. I found the whole thing entertaining and wondered at your skill of repeated added more and more depth to the piece with each added pun. Well written.
Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Thank you, Mark. It was a fun write :)