2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "I Lost Her".
7 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Lost love is painful, but I'm betting the memory of times together is even more painful. Thank you for sharing your God given talent with us. This entire emotional presentation was wonderful.
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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Lost love is painful, but I'm betting the memory of times together is even more painful. Thank you for sharing your God given talent with us. This entire emotional presentation was wonderful.
Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy
Comment from juliaSjames
Very well written poem of lost love. Although as you say you chose to write from the POV of a man, you express universal feelings. I can almost hear the tears behind that final line, "I lost her"
Excellent romantic images.
As always in your free verse, the line breaks create their own rhythm.
Thanks for sharing
Blessings, Julia
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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Very well written poem of lost love. Although as you say you chose to write from the POV of a man, you express universal feelings. I can almost hear the tears behind that final line, "I lost her"
Excellent romantic images.
As always in your free verse, the line breaks create their own rhythm.
Thanks for sharing
Blessings, Julia
Comment Written 13-May-2024
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Julia. I try keeping the rhythm in my poems, thank you for noticing
Gypsy
Comment from kahpot
Very well done, and also for changing up the emotion, we all should think about how someone else maybe feeling about loss and grief, beautifully written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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Very well done, and also for changing up the emotion, we all should think about how someone else maybe feeling about loss and grief, beautifully written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 13-May-2024
reply by the author on 14-May-2024
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Thank you very much, kym
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
You did a great job in your Neruda - inspired poem. I especially liked "all that remains are dying embers and emptiness." A lost love must feel like that.
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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You did a great job in your Neruda - inspired poem. I especially liked "all that remains are dying embers and emptiness." A lost love must feel like that.
Comment Written 13-May-2024
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister 😘
love
marival
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy......and one that captures the confusion of relationships and the lies we tell ourselves to survive what can be a traumatic event in our lives, or at the very least the bewilderment one feels at losing a major piece of your life
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy......and one that captures the confusion of relationships and the lies we tell ourselves to survive what can be a traumatic event in our lives, or at the very least the bewilderment one feels at losing a major piece of your life
Comment Written 13-May-2024
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Mike
gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
aww a heartbroken man remembering love. . .
very nicely written with good imagistic word choices and smooth flow throughout
love the little roses between the stanzas - nice touch!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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aww a heartbroken man remembering love. . .
very nicely written with good imagistic word choices and smooth flow throughout
love the little roses between the stanzas - nice touch!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 13-May-2024
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
gypsy
Comment from royowen
A great collection of short verses in which we we see great abstraction of conversing with the wind and all that entails, that's such a very good thing, it sparks the creative in us. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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A great collection of short verses in which we we see great abstraction of conversing with the wind and all that entails, that's such a very good thing, it sparks the creative in us. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-May-2024
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy
gypsy
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Most welcome