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Comment from
dragonpoet
Hi Jim,
You ask many good questions and give needed advice in the end of the poem. I would say Abel was better then Cain, because he was faithful and honest. I would say Moses and Aaron are equals. And, of coarse, Jesus is greater than his disciples. We all need to try our best to follow the path laid out for us in the best way possible.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Congrats it looks like you are in a tie for second
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 17-May-2024
Comment from
Julie G1
So well expressed. We must seek God's understanding, as we are all mere humans. The poet has depicted a vivid message with an apt choice of vocabulary and imagery. Well done, worked well for this reader.
Comment Written 16-May-2024
Comment from
bonespur
Loved your choice of words throughout the poem. I too am a believer. God is our greatest love
..or should be. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 16-May-2024
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