Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem, Gypsy....and I wrote a review of this and sent it, somewhere, no idea where it went, so if you get it feel free to keep the extra review as my gift to you. And isn't this the truth, love reduces the adult in us to babbling morons of inability to accept the truth, much like Trump voters!

 Comment Written 12-May-2024

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reply by the author on 12-May-2024

Thank you very much, Mike

gypsy

Comment from Jumbo J

Exceptional

Hi MariVal,
Me encanta la forma en que este poema y su intención flotan en el aire, flotando en el pensamiento del tiempo en una burbuja suspendida.

Realmente me encanta cuando 'donde la luna besa las estrellas'... está tan bellamente escrito... se absorbe en el alma dentro de su magia.

Su presentación, composición, construcción y combinación de colores permiten que este y su impresionante poema tanka brillen tan intensamente como la luna y tan tiernamente como los besos depositados sobre ella... ¡realmente hermoso!


Con nuestros pensamientos creamos...
un lugar en nuestro corazón que sabe.

El más cálido saludo,
Jaime.

 Comment Written 11-May-2024

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reply by the author on 11-May-2024

Look at you, escribiendo en Español!!!! Gracias, Jaime, te lo agradezco con todo el corazon y alma. Muchisimas gracias por las seis brillante estrellas. Me encanta que te guste mi poema.

Besitos y abrazos, amigo mio, mi amigo Mas guapo.

MarVal

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

It's hard to move on, even when we know we should. Often our heart refuses to listen to our brain. I so wish it would. At least my heart has mind of its own. Thank you for sharing this beautifully emotional poem with us.

 Comment Written 11-May-2024

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reply by the author on 11-May-2024

Thank you very much for the kind review.

Gypsy

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

love the pic with the crow walking towards her
gives a peaceful feeling to the saddened words
great imagery with the moon kissing the stars

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 10-May-2024

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reply by the author on 10-May-2024

thank you very much, Shelley

gypsy

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes it can be so difficult to achieve this 'my mind knows I must move on ' but then our heart sings a different song 'follows a different way' stated without frills here

 Comment Written 10-May-2024

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reply by the author on 10-May-2024

thank you very much, Zanya

gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Beautifully said, MariVal! And we care too much with our hearts so that even if our minds know to move on, our hearts will always remember. I like the mourning of the "woeful notes."

 Comment Written 10-May-2024

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reply by the author on 10-May-2024

thank you very much, big sister.

love
marival