L'Amour Toujours
Love Poem6 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Strauser
This is such a beautiful poem and so is the picture. Perfect for the poem. The poem is so descriptive. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest. Great job.
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This is such a beautiful poem and so is the picture. Perfect for the poem. The poem is so descriptive. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest. Great job.
Comment Written 10-May-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine acrostic filled with romance and love and I enjoyed the ride here and wish you luck with the contest, those alluring kisses are magical, love Dolly x x x
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A fine acrostic filled with romance and love and I enjoyed the ride here and wish you luck with the contest, those alluring kisses are magical, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 09-May-2024
Comment from Dr. Nad
I love how you created a rhyming love poem with an acrostic message. You've given us all a new way of considering romance. Thanks For the romantic focus
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I love how you created a rhyming love poem with an acrostic message. You've given us all a new way of considering romance. Thanks For the romantic focus
Comment Written 09-May-2024
Comment from kiwisteveh
Hmmm... My first thought was that you probably shouldn't make things harder for yourself by crafting an Acrostic when this contest doesn't call for it. There is almost always something a little unnatural about acrostics which may not serve you well in the contest.
Oops! Now I have to apologise! I just looked at the title of the contest - Romance - and didn't initially realise the prompt does in fact call for an acrostic. That puts this entry in a far better light. Ignore everything I said in my first paragraph!
Second thing is a nitpick - Toujours should have an S on the end - sorry, I'm a former French teacher.
I have to say that even the poem itself doesn't thrill me. In comparison to the previous poem of yours I have reviewed (free verse) it is definitely weaker. For example, your last line doesn't make sense - at least to me. Your note about the absurdity is perhaps a reflection that you recognise that too.
Steve
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Hmmm... My first thought was that you probably shouldn't make things harder for yourself by crafting an Acrostic when this contest doesn't call for it. There is almost always something a little unnatural about acrostics which may not serve you well in the contest.
Oops! Now I have to apologise! I just looked at the title of the contest - Romance - and didn't initially realise the prompt does in fact call for an acrostic. That puts this entry in a far better light. Ignore everything I said in my first paragraph!
Second thing is a nitpick - Toujours should have an S on the end - sorry, I'm a former French teacher.
I have to say that even the poem itself doesn't thrill me. In comparison to the previous poem of yours I have reviewed (free verse) it is definitely weaker. For example, your last line doesn't make sense - at least to me. Your note about the absurdity is perhaps a reflection that you recognise that too.
Steve
Comment Written 09-May-2024
Comment from Brandi Radaker
I really enjoyed reading this poem. It has a nice flow to it. I could feel the beautifully absurdity of love as you intended. It's whimsical and well done. I wanted to keep reading more. Best wishes!
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I really enjoyed reading this poem. It has a nice flow to it. I could feel the beautifully absurdity of love as you intended. It's whimsical and well done. I wanted to keep reading more. Best wishes!
Comment Written 09-May-2024
Comment from Nicki Nance
This is a tasty acrostic that has a life. Images of fairies, descriptors like nimble, and the verbs... Canoodle, woo, meander and the dancing lovers on graphic turned this into a real story.
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This is a tasty acrostic that has a life. Images of fairies, descriptors like nimble, and the verbs... Canoodle, woo, meander and the dancing lovers on graphic turned this into a real story.
Comment Written 09-May-2024