Gun 1-9-1 Poem
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Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a terse but telling poem. Gun violence has take way to many lives. It does seem like some people think gun ownership might be as patriotic as the gun in the picture suggests.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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Hi
This is a terse but telling poem. Gun violence has take way to many lives. It does seem like some people think gun ownership might be as patriotic as the gun in the picture suggests.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 12-May-2024
reply by the author on 12-May-2024
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thanks a lot
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You?re most welcome, Jake..
Joan
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 1-9-1 poem writing prompt. There is a lot of truth spoken in only eleven syllables. I wish we could pass gun reform using lots of syllables and many edulated brains. thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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An excellent entry for the 1-9-1 poem writing prompt. There is a lot of truth spoken in only eleven syllables. I wish we could pass gun reform using lots of syllables and many edulated brains. thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-May-2024
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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thanks a lot
Comment from Mintybee
1-9-1 is hard to do. With such a limited format, you've still made a point. I appreciate the connection drawn between the first and third line. Two words that far apart is probably not alliteration, but it's a parallel at least. I think it worked well.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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1-9-1 is hard to do. With such a limited format, you've still made a point. I appreciate the connection drawn between the first and third line. Two words that far apart is probably not alliteration, but it's a parallel at least. I think it worked well.
Mintybee
Comment Written 07-May-2024
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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thank a lot