2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "The World Awakens".
7 total reviews
Comment from juliaSjames
Wildly creative, Gypsy. "sows sunrise seeds" is a superb phrase, both in imagery and alliteration. I'm so accustomed to Venus as the goddess of love that it took me a beat to realize that you were speaking of the morning star. This poem recalls to my mind the morning in California when my husband and I drove home in a daze of happiness after seeing the first pictures of our brand new granddaughter. The sky was paling with first light and Venus was shining in all her splendour.
Beautiful work, beautifully presented, Gypsy
Blessings, Julia
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Wildly creative, Gypsy. "sows sunrise seeds" is a superb phrase, both in imagery and alliteration. I'm so accustomed to Venus as the goddess of love that it took me a beat to realize that you were speaking of the morning star. This poem recalls to my mind the morning in California when my husband and I drove home in a daze of happiness after seeing the first pictures of our brand new granddaughter. The sky was paling with first light and Venus was shining in all her splendour.
Beautiful work, beautifully presented, Gypsy
Blessings, Julia
Comment Written 05-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
hmm... how about first line in green, second line in a pink, third line in blue - light pastels... eh, just a thought - cool pics!!
a great 575 haiku
cool imagery and smooth flow
like the S sounds...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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hmm... how about first line in green, second line in a pink, third line in blue - light pastels... eh, just a thought - cool pics!!
a great 575 haiku
cool imagery and smooth flow
like the S sounds...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 04-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Venus sowing sunrise seeds over a blue planet gives your readers a wonderful image in their minds. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and this presentation with us.
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Venus sowing sunrise seeds over a blue planet gives your readers a wonderful image in their minds. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and this presentation with us.
Comment Written 04-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Sowing sunrise seeds over the enchanting blue planet. What a beautiful phrase. Where do you come up with these lovely sayings? This whole presentation is one of the loveliest with the beautiful art in both pictures and so few words that mean so much. Awesome post, my lovely friend. Hugs! Debi
I will be sending you and email soon, as I have something to ask you about your grandson.
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Sowing sunrise seeds over the enchanting blue planet. What a beautiful phrase. Where do you come up with these lovely sayings? This whole presentation is one of the loveliest with the beautiful art in both pictures and so few words that mean so much. Awesome post, my lovely friend. Hugs! Debi
I will be sending you and email soon, as I have something to ask you about your grandson.
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Debi. I don't know where they come from.... I guess my imagination 😊
I got your email and responded. I hope you got it.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Love
Marival
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I did get your email and I am going to try to find something that I think Atticus might get a kick out of. Most of it is silly, but they are smash ups. So I will send him something in the next day or so. My two youngest grandsons are really into Minecraft too.
Comment from lyenochka
Venus is sometimes called the morning star as it shines really big and bright in the morning during part of the year. I like your poetic phrase of her sowing "sunrise seeds."
In the book of Revelation, chapter 22, Jesus refers to Himself as the morning star: ". I am the Root and the Offspring of David, and the bright Morning Star."
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Venus is sometimes called the morning star as it shines really big and bright in the morning during part of the year. I like your poetic phrase of her sowing "sunrise seeds."
In the book of Revelation, chapter 22, Jesus refers to Himself as the morning star: ". I am the Root and the Offspring of David, and the bright Morning Star."
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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I like that Bible passage, it's a lovely thing to say. He does show us the way.
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Yay Venus de Milo is my "family," as she was found on the Island of Milo's, where my Das was born and raised. Italians broke off her Arma and changed her name, but could not change her beauty or her strength. This is a wonderful poem and a colorful presentation. Thus made my day. Thank you for sharing this.
Great work,
Alexan x
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Yay Venus de Milo is my "family," as she was found on the Island of Milo's, where my Das was born and raised. Italians broke off her Arma and changed her name, but could not change her beauty or her strength. This is a wonderful poem and a colorful presentation. Thus made my day. Thank you for sharing this.
Great work,
Alexan x
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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How interesting. You have a wonderful culture. Thank you, alexan. Have a wonderful weekend.
Love,
Marival
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Thank you. Have a wonderful weekend, too, Marival!
Love, Alexan
Comment from RJ Heritage
Your imagery is always really beautiful. The words go hand in hand with your verses. Thanks for sharing your work. Have a great evening.
Good bless.
RJ
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Your imagery is always really beautiful. The words go hand in hand with your verses. Thanks for sharing your work. Have a great evening.
Good bless.
RJ
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You are welcome