Spring Is Catching
A 3-7-5 contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have 4 votes.
We are still waiting for Spring weather .. it's been very cold with a day here and there warmer.
People were still skiing on the 1st of May.
All the blossom has rotten and crop growers ain't too happy .
I still loved the wording of your wee poem .
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
Ciao mystery poet, you now have 4 votes.
We are still waiting for Spring weather .. it's been very cold with a day here and there warmer.
People were still skiing on the 1st of May.
All the blossom has rotten and crop growers ain't too happy .
I still loved the wording of your wee poem .
Comment Written 05-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you very much, tempeste, for your praise of my wee poem and your vote. I hope Spring bursts soon your way.
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You are welcome ! 🙂
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This is an excellent entry for the 3-7-5 writing prompt. I like the compatison of Spring to a child's smile and then ending it with everyone smiling because Spring has arrived. Creative. Good luck
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
This is an excellent entry for the 3-7-5 writing prompt. I like the compatison of Spring to a child's smile and then ending it with everyone smiling because Spring has arrived. Creative. Good luck
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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I am delighted you like the comparison, Marilyn. Thank you for sharing my shortie.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I like your poem because it is very uplifting. Your good imagery and descriptive words are supported by the photo of such a precious child smiling in the sunshine.
Best wishes.
Alex
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
I like your poem because it is very uplifting. Your good imagery and descriptive words are supported by the photo of such a precious child smiling in the sunshine.
Best wishes.
Alex
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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I am delighted you found my short poem uplifting and enjoyed the imagery. Many thanks for sharing, Alexandra.
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You're welcome.