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Lair Of The Seductress

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Book Four Wolf Bend Series

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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Well, that was unexpected I must say. She left clothes behind. Quite a wrinkle in spirit/ reality flux. I do enjoy your brainy brain. I have gotten so behind, but I will catch up eventually. :-)

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
    I?ve have been moving along at a snail?s pace.
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 27-Jun-2024
    Whiled I was arranging the move and handling details and packing I wasn't reading silly boy! Trix is for kids. :-)
Comment from royowen
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How interesting Lilith nearly tempted an elderly man, no really old, but he had always been faithful to his wife, so it seems like Lilith cannot take the life of a faithful man. Now that's a revelation, beautifully written Douglas, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 03-May-2024


reply by the author on 04-May-2024
    Thank you, Roy. Very kind.
reply by royowen on 05-May-2024
    You?re amazing Douglas
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Creepy. creepy! I like the way this is going, Doug! She's real enigma isn't she? Now we've got the supernatural element in your story, this gets more and more mysterious. She's drawn to older men with wives as though she can only exact her revenge on younger men, less committed. Excellent dialogue and thought processes and definitely setting Greg on a new track of investigation. Well done, Doug! Another goodie! Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 02-May-2024


reply by the author on 04-May-2024
    Thank you, Debbie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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We are getting more information on Lilith. I'm sitting here telling Greg to be careful, but I know he won't so why am I talking to him? Besides he's not real. Oh well, I'm still giving him a lecture. Thank you for sharing. Love the story.

 Comment Written 02-May-2024


reply by the author on 04-May-2024
    Thank you, my friend. You are too kind.
Comment from Julie Helms
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Hmmm...I don't see Lilith accidentally leaving her clothes behind. It feels like bait.
This continues to be an interesting combo of paranormal and crime drama. The black blade is a nice addition. Probably not found in the Official Police Handbook!
I cant wait to go tell my friend, Lisa Smith, that she features in a story, and as a sexy murdering goddess roaming junk yards butt naked!
A totally engaging chapter.
Julie

 Comment Written 02-May-2024


reply by the author on 04-May-2024
    Thank you Julie. The blade came from the last book, Hag?s Hollow. The witch used it.

    Appreciate you.
    D
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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This may be my favorite chapter here to date. Mesmerizingly humorous. I would have ended it as Haruki did but not envisioning Akani, of course, but my wife. In addition, at seventy-six the plumbing ain't what it once was so her efforts likely would not have prevailed.

 Comment Written 02-May-2024


reply by the author on 04-May-2024
    Thank you, Tom. I myself enjoyed this one.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Well, that's new.
This is another well-written chapter. Good work.
Greg needs to hurry and find Lillith, and stick that sword into her heart.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 02-May-2024


reply by the author on 04-May-2024
    We shall see if it plays out that way. Have a feeling it is about to go sideways real fast.