What We See
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Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. Ginnie's drawl is great. And she plays a great Desiree Love. I jumped ahead and read the next chapter. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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This is another excellent chapter. Ginnie's drawl is great. And she plays a great Desiree Love. I jumped ahead and read the next chapter. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 04-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter, Lee. It was kind of fun to write Ginnie's part.
Comment from BethShelby
Ginnie put on a good show but I don't blame her for being worried about Alan going don't. I don't see him just handing the hard drive over so easily. It is good he is checking the references for the man he hopes to hire.
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Ginnie put on a good show but I don't blame her for being worried about Alan going don't. I don't see him just handing the hard drive over so easily. It is good he is checking the references for the man he hopes to hire.
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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You're right. It probably won't go as easily as that. One more precaution he plans to make.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Ginnie and Alan worked well together trying to get information on Warren. And now Alan's going into the lions den to confront them. This was a good read Jim wirh both drama and humour.
Well done,
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Ginnie and Alan worked well together trying to get information on Warren. And now Alan's going into the lions den to confront them. This was a good read Jim wirh both drama and humour.
Well done,
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Thanks so much, Valda. I like that: into the lion's den.Yeah
Comment from lyenochka
Ginnie is brilliant and should get an Oscar for her ad lib acting! But oh dear, I'm plenty worried! And I hope the new assistant is a good and honest guy that Alan can rely on.
Shouldn't Alan bring backup and have the police right behind him?
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Ginnie is brilliant and should get an Oscar for her ad lib acting! But oh dear, I'm plenty worried! And I hope the new assistant is a good and honest guy that Alan can rely on.
Shouldn't Alan bring backup and have the police right behind him?
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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He probably should have some sort of backup, but I guess he just thinks he'll leave and give up on the idea if it looks like it will be dangerous. He may be in for a rude awakening.
Comment from Mark Jackson
This chapter effectively combines elements of mystery, suspense, and interpersonal drama to create a compelling narrative that keeps the reader engaged from start to finish. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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This chapter effectively combines elements of mystery, suspense, and interpersonal drama to create a compelling narrative that keeps the reader engaged from start to finish. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thanks very much, Mark. This is leading up to a dramatic finish I hope you will find equally engaging. Next chapter on Tuesday.
Comment from tfawcus
Good to hear that Alan has a potential replacement lined up. Now for the confrontation. I hope it goes well. Ginnie did a splendid job of setting Warren up.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Good to hear that Alan has a potential replacement lined up. Now for the confrontation. I hope it goes well. Ginnie did a splendid job of setting Warren up.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thanks very much, Tony. We'll have to see how smart or dumb this unplanned plan of his is to get the drive back.
Comment from royowen
Allen and Ginnie devise a plan to catch Warren.out, and Allen's going to catch him out by going to the location they wheedle out. Ginnie devises the name of Desiree Love to trap the thief, this has been terrifically interesting watching you cleverly plotting your story's course. Well done Jim, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Allen and Ginnie devise a plan to catch Warren.out, and Allen's going to catch him out by going to the location they wheedle out. Ginnie devises the name of Desiree Love to trap the thief, this has been terrifically interesting watching you cleverly plotting your story's course. Well done Jim, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Roy. We'll see if he's bitten off more than he can chew with this "no real plan" plan of his.
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You?ve made it interesting Jim
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, this doesn't sound like something David would do. I get it. You want to show he is changing, but I don't think Ginnie, now a wife, would advise David to physically challenge, not one but two, criminally minded brothers. The notion of them stabbing or shooting him is real, and if David tries to take his hard drive, (doesn't know where it is), he could easily go to jail, if he survived. David is too smart (he was) and timid to do that. As is Ginnie.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Hmm, this doesn't sound like something David would do. I get it. You want to show he is changing, but I don't think Ginnie, now a wife, would advise David to physically challenge, not one but two, criminally minded brothers. The notion of them stabbing or shooting him is real, and if David tries to take his hard drive, (doesn't know where it is), he could easily go to jail, if he survived. David is too smart (he was) and timid to do that. As is Ginnie.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Yes, this is out of character for Alan, but he's not stupid. He will scout things out, and I don't think he has plans just to barge in with both brothers there. He will bide his time until he sees an opportunity. Plus, he plans to take one more precaution which will become clear in the next chapter.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I think I would be more afraid for Alan than Ginnie seems to be. But this is a different time from when they are living. Still, Alan should maybe consider taking a friend or Arkansas police officer with him as it will be two to one in that house.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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I think I would be more afraid for Alan than Ginnie seems to be. But this is a different time from when they are living. Still, Alan should maybe consider taking a friend or Arkansas police officer with him as it will be two to one in that house.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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That's a good point, and I think I may beef up Ginnie's fear of this situation more than I have. But Alan is determined to go, so he will override her fear.
Comment from LJbutterfly
I enjoyed the telephone conversation between Ginnie and Dennis. Ginnie handled it quite well. I previously noted how Alan's personality changed during the course of the story. But now, he's going to become a dare devil by confronting Warren. I can't wait to find out how this turns out.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed the telephone conversation between Ginnie and Dennis. Ginnie handled it quite well. I previously noted how Alan's personality changed during the course of the story. But now, he's going to become a dare devil by confronting Warren. I can't wait to find out how this turns out.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Lorraine. It may be a risky and dumb thing to do, but he's determined. He doesn't have a specific plan, so anything can happen.