Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

A sweet and warm poem of two people who are too shy to express their feelings for each other.
It captures this readers heart. I enjoyed reading.
Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024

Thank you, Mary, for your sweet words.

Comment from Erika Whittle

Excellent

This is cute. They're both shy :) Ohh, the beginning stages of love. I don't think there's anything quite like it. Mature love is good but this type of innocent, childlike love has a special place is many people's hearts I imagine. Good job

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024

Late in thanking you, but no less sincere.

reply by Erika Whittle on 13-Jun-2024

Lol np :)

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Ginda,
This is a smoothly metered poem with unforced rhyme. It shows these two people love each other but let shyness get in their way. If he could make the effort so could she. Maybe she can exchange letter for letter and then that will make it easier to talk face to face.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024

Late in thanking you, but no less sincere.

reply by dragonpoet on 13-Jun-2024

You are most kindly welcome. Your lateness is forgiven.
Joan

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I see it was also a NaProWriMo 2024 challenge entry. This entry is a tender romance and I happen to love romance. Thank you for sharing it with us. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024

Late in thanking you, but no less sincere.

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

Great description of one who is too timid to express his feelings for a woman. I love the humorous twist at the end. Great rhymes and steady rhythm to your sweet poem. Best wishes in the contest. Carol

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024

Thanks for the review and the good wishes.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very lovely and well written poem you have penned for the poem about a man contest. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024

Thanks so much, Teri, for this positive review.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. Well, that's a stalemate if both are going to be that shy! I think she has to bite the bullet and express her thanks, at least! Enjoyed your humorous story in verse. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024

Thanks and Blessings.

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

This is such a sweet poem about two timid people who are afraid to express their feelings - hopefully it will work out! Very Victorian in its style. I enjoyed this romantic piece

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024

Thank you, June.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Lovely! I hope they both found the courage to connect, and that a new and happy love relationship was born through the power of the written word. Well written. I like the little twist at th end. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024

Thank you, Wendy.

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Quite a well-done number twenty-seven. I do the like that little turn-about at the ending.

Made me wonder what percentage of people are actually shy. Interesting.

Good job and good luck in the competition.
D

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024

Thank you, Doug.