2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "Her Body".
8 total reviews
Comment from shelley kaye
nice contrast between soft, supple skin and tanned, worn, tired skin
with a thought-provoking meaning between the lines
smoothly flowing free verse
with great imagery
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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nice contrast between soft, supple skin and tanned, worn, tired skin
with a thought-provoking meaning between the lines
smoothly flowing free verse
with great imagery
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
So many men have fallen for the wilds of a beautiful women. It's amazing how that happens. Is the beautiful woman that powerful or are the men that weak. Just wondering. Your presentation is wonderful. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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So many men have fallen for the wilds of a beautiful women. It's amazing how that happens. Is the beautiful woman that powerful or are the men that weak. Just wondering. Your presentation is wonderful. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
Somehow, a goddess like the girl in the artwork image would hold the attention of most red blooded males I feel..but the attractive bit is the wonderful language that you use Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Somehow, a goddess like the girl in the artwork image would hold the attention of most red blooded males I feel..but the attractive bit is the wonderful language that you use Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
Comment from lyenochka
Your poem about Mother Nature's body makes her out to be full of sex appeal. But she's also pretty "down to Earth" and makes even the homely things of nature comforting. I liked your Arthurian legend reference.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Your poem about Mother Nature's body makes her out to be full of sex appeal. But she's also pretty "down to Earth" and makes even the homely things of nature comforting. I liked your Arthurian legend reference.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I made a few changes. I'm not happy with the way it turned out.
Love,
Marival
Comment from GWHARGIS
This is another poem that lends itself to a fabulous description. It wants to become a story. You have set the characters up to be explored. Beautiful imagery that feeds our imagination. I'm dying for you to try your hand at fiction. Even flash fiction would be a great starting point. Gretchen
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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This is another poem that lends itself to a fabulous description. It wants to become a story. You have set the characters up to be explored. Beautiful imagery that feeds our imagination. I'm dying for you to try your hand at fiction. Even flash fiction would be a great starting point. Gretchen
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thank you for encouraging me to write prose.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a fantastic weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy......and you're quite good at writing what I like to call titular poetry--okay, that is a name I just made up; doesn't even make sense and yes, there's a twelve year old boy trapped in my 61 year old body!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy......and you're quite good at writing what I like to call titular poetry--okay, that is a name I just made up; doesn't even make sense and yes, there's a twelve year old boy trapped in my 61 year old body!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Hahaha... I know how you feel. There's a 15 y.o. girl trapped in my 65 yrs old body. It sucks.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
This is obviously seen through the eyes of a man. She is beautiful and the words express the passion felt. I really don't see how so many people today in our society claim that men and women are the same. Thank God in his wisdom he has created us different and complimentary of each other.
RJ
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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This is obviously seen through the eyes of a man. She is beautiful and the words express the passion felt. I really don't see how so many people today in our society claim that men and women are the same. Thank God in his wisdom he has created us different and complimentary of each other.
RJ
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RodG
A perfect female body is alluring to most males, even farmers like the Speaker in this poem. He finds this creature absolutely irresistible. One hopes she sees something in him, too.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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A perfect female body is alluring to most males, even farmers like the Speaker in this poem. He finds this creature absolutely irresistible. One hopes she sees something in him, too.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs