All You Need
The good things.3 total reviews
Comment from gansach
A lovely 5-7-5 poem with a beautiful picture to illustrate it perfectly. The sentiment is very true especially in today's world of greed & want, want, want. If you have the necessities to make you happy & comfortable, you have all you need. Great job! Good luck!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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A lovely 5-7-5 poem with a beautiful picture to illustrate it perfectly. The sentiment is very true especially in today's world of greed & want, want, want. If you have the necessities to make you happy & comfortable, you have all you need. Great job! Good luck!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wise advice here and these days possessions are meaningless when we live without love and kindness, I enjoyed your intuitive, clever and caring words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Wise advice here and these days possessions are meaningless when we live without love and kindness, I enjoyed your intuitive, clever and caring words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Dolly.
Comment from Mark Jackson
Very true. Wise words. a very good entry into the 5/7/5 I think it will do well. The break in this is after the top line and not as is more common after the second. I like the way you actually demand a pause.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Very true. Wise words. a very good entry into the 5/7/5 I think it will do well. The break in this is after the top line and not as is more common after the second. I like the way you actually demand a pause.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Mark.