Beautiful ocean scene
Waves crash and foam4 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a truthful and good poem. I can certainly relate to this because I grew up by the ocean and always left by the ocean. There's nothing else to think when looking at it other than it was sent by God. This is very well written too.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
This is a truthful and good poem. I can certainly relate to this because I grew up by the ocean and always left by the ocean. There's nothing else to think when looking at it other than it was sent by God. This is very well written too.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The mystical sea never fails to amuse us as we watch the waves and reflect on life. Fine words for the 5-7-5 contest and I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
The mystical sea never fails to amuse us as we watch the waves and reflect on life. Fine words for the 5-7-5 contest and I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed this 5-7-5 poem. You got the syllable count right, and I liked the words you used. "post card beauty" was a great phrase. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
I enjoyed this 5-7-5 poem. You got the syllable count right, and I liked the words you used. "post card beauty" was a great phrase. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from FurryBunny
This poem is powerful in its imagery of crashing waves and references to God as their creator, evoking a serene and mystical beauty. The simplicity of the poem enhances its impact, making it a strong piece of work. Well done!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
This poem is powerful in its imagery of crashing waves and references to God as their creator, evoking a serene and mystical beauty. The simplicity of the poem enhances its impact, making it a strong piece of work. Well done!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much