Stripe tailed Theif
Haiku about a favorite animal3 total reviews
Comment from Julie Helms
Welcome to Fanstory!
This is a cute haiku. I'm thinking a raccoon because of the bandit reference?
Some spelling corrections:
Thief
Striped (I assume you mean with stripes, not naked--stripped)
Thanks for sharing!
Julie
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Welcome to Fanstory!
This is a cute haiku. I'm thinking a raccoon because of the bandit reference?
Some spelling corrections:
Thief
Striped (I assume you mean with stripes, not naked--stripped)
Thanks for sharing!
Julie
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your help Julie. It is about a raccoon, yes! I sometimes have a difficult time spotting my own mistakes, so I deeply appreciate your advice.
Comment from EeanBlack
A short poem is like a short story, it just starts to get good and it ends. I was not left wanting, but like with most poems to me, I am left trying to figure the meaning or trying to deduce the phycology of the writer or a thousand other things. I over think. This is good.
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A short poem is like a short story, it just starts to get good and it ends. I was not left wanting, but like with most poems to me, I am left trying to figure the meaning or trying to deduce the phycology of the writer or a thousand other things. I over think. This is good.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This isn't excellent 575 poem with good colorful descriptions and sensory words. I thought of a skunk. This is thought provoking too. Best wishes to you.
Alex
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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This isn't excellent 575 poem with good colorful descriptions and sensory words. I thought of a skunk. This is thought provoking too. Best wishes to you.
Alex
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
