Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao !

I have a close friend that suffered much in Spring due to pollen in the air.

She alway has a blocked nose , puffy eyes, eternally a handkerchief in her hand.

This season is so colourful but she finds it a curse.

PS: I'm sure you worked on the rhyme which I enjoyed but unfortunately the senryu format Is supposed to be unrhymed.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024

Thanks for the tip, and the lovely review.

reply by tempeste on 08-Apr-2024

You are welcome!

Best of luck !🍀

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Oh yeah! What should we do because we love these beautiful blooms and their scents! Well penned and illustrated in short verse poetry.

All my best in the senryu contest, mystery poet.
Sally :))

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024

Thank you so much.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was a good piece, I think. You got the syllable count correct, and this was dedicated to a thing as was one of the options. I am sorry for your allergies! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024

Spring is the only time I pop pills, thank God for antihistamines. Thanks for your review.

Comment from GoWiSt

Excellent

Ah yes, I know many who suffer allergies in spring. Ironic, as it's meant to be a pleasant season. :-(
Nice rhymes.
Fulfilled the line and syllable count requirements for this poem type/contest. Good luck!

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024

Deeply appreciated.