"The Gift of Life 2003"
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Comment from Mia Twysted
After reading your notes the "eye" you used throughout the piece made more sense. It is awful to have to lost those near to your especially your children. May your memories be heartfule tnad uplifting.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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After reading your notes the "eye" you used throughout the piece made more sense. It is awful to have to lost those near to your especially your children. May your memories be heartfule tnad uplifting.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thanksia and enjoy the almost Spring weather!
Doctor Ricky
Comment from barbara.wilkey
When we die, our bodies are restored to perfect, for our spirits to live. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I couldn't find any way to improve this.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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When we die, our bodies are restored to perfect, for our spirits to live. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I couldn't find any way to improve this.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thanks Barbara and enjoy this up and coming Spring weather.
Doctor Ricky
