The King
A 3-5-3 poem2 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
These 3/5/3's are very hard to create a complete idea. They make you feel like you are missing words.
I think you did a nice job here of portraying your idea. Good luck!
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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These 3/5/3's are very hard to create a complete idea. They make you feel like you are missing words.
I think you did a nice job here of portraying your idea. Good luck!
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Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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I agree with you on the 3-5-3s. I tried to make it a complete thought. Thanks for the good luck. I have a feeling I'm going to need it.
Comment from jessizero
You have the syllable count right (3-5-3), but you have this listed in the description as a 3-5-5 poem. I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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You have the syllable count right (3-5-3), but you have this listed in the description as a 3-5-5 poem. I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Sorry, my error. It is supposed to be a 3-5-3. Thank you for pointing that out. I appreciate your comments.